Talk:Morane-Borel military monoplane/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 08:41, 22 October 2022 (UTC)

I will take a look at this one shortly. Zawed (talk) 08:41, 22 October 2022 (UTC)

It took longer than expected to come back to this one, but now here. There's not much to this article though:

Lead

• Mention Etablissements Borel as manufacturer with a pipelink as Morane-Borel

Design

• The military monoplane was derived from the company's: suggest "The military monoplane was derived from Morane-Borel's..."
• There is a disambig tag on undercarriage
• Maybe break into two paragraphs at the point Lateral control...

History

• French Army decided to sponsor a competitive event to be held at Reims in October. Add the link to the competition.
  • Linked in the lede.
• The company leadership... suggest writing the name of the company here as well.

Specifications

• Nothing is listed under the "Performance" heading?
  • No performance data has survived.

Other stuff

• Image tag OK
• Best I can figure from Google translate, the Hartmann ref supports what is cited to it. AGF on the others
• Disambig tag on undercarriage as noted above

That's it for me, placing on hold. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 04:24, 6 November 2022 (UTC)

Sorry to take so long to respond. See if my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:29, 10 November 2022 (UTC)

OK, passing as GA. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:46, 17 November 2022 (UTC)