Talk:Morane-Borel military monoplane
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Waylon1104 in topic three people weighing at least 300 kilograms
Morane-Borel military monoplane has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: November 17, 2022. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 08:41, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
I will take a look at this one shortly. Zawed (talk) 08:41, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
It took longer than expected to come back to this one, but now here. There's not much to this article though:
Lead
- Mention Etablissements Borel as manufacturer with a pipelink as Morane-Borel
Design
- The military monoplane was derived from the company's: suggest "The military monoplane was derived from Morane-Borel's..."
- There is a disambig tag on undercarriage
- Maybe break into two paragraphs at the point Lateral control...
History
- French Army decided to sponsor a competitive event to be held at Reims in October. Add the link to the competition.
- Linked in the lede.
- The company leadership... suggest writing the name of the company here as well.
Specifications
- Nothing is listed under the "Performance" heading?
- No performance data has survived.
Other stuff
- Image tag OK
- Best I can figure from Google translate, the Hartmann ref supports what is cited to it. AGF on the others
- Disambig tag on undercarriage as noted above
That's it for me, placing on hold. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 04:24, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
- Sorry to take so long to respond. See if my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:29, 10 November 2022 (UTC)
- OK, passing as GA. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:46, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
Did you know nomination
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The result was: promoted by RoySmith (talk) 21:42, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
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- ... that there was only one prototype of the Morane-Borel military monoplane (pictured)? Source: Lacaze, Henri & Lherbert, Claude (2013). Morane Saulnier: ses avions, ses projets [Morane Saulnier: Their Aircraft and Projects] (in French). Outreau, France: Lela Presse. ISBN 978-2-914017-70-1. Page 16
- ALT1: ... that the Morane-Borel military monoplane (pictured) participated in the Reims Military Aviation Competition where it lost? Source: Same as above.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/WHYY-TV
Improved to Good Article status by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke (talk) at 01:02, 22 November 2022 (UTC).
- Either hook is interesting and are well within prescribed limits. Article is long enough and has 'GA' status and is eligible for a DYK presentation. Sources check. Image is in the public domain. Earwig detects no copy-vio issues. Article is Good-to-Go, -- Gwillhickers (talk) 18:41, 22 November 2022 (UTC)
three people weighing at least 300 kilograms
editIs it possible? How could they find so many Overweight people? Waylon1104 (talk) 10:55, 3 May 2023 (UTC)