Talk:Moses Gray (American football)/GA1

Latest comment: 1 year ago by WikiOriginal-9 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 22:17, 19 October 2023 (UTC)Reply


  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Notes

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  • I added an image
  • The infobox doesn't follow the proper team chronology right now.
  • I'm not sure those highlights are notable enough for the infobox.
    • Removed.
  • Were you able to find any more info on his college career like stats or honors?
    • Wasn't able to.
  • "213th overall" change to 214th
    • Done.
  • "In his sophomore and junior seasons, he averaged 18 minutes played per game" Maybe I missed something but I think the source is only talking about his junior year?
    • Changed.
  • "before seeing more action as a senior" The source used for that is before the season started
    • Changed to saying he was a starter as a senior with a new ref.
  • "afterwards was sent to the Indianapolis Warriors" I don't see Gray mentioned in the source
  • "and retired afterwards" I don't see in that source where he "retired"
    • Changed the phrasing some.
  • ref 1 says he was born in Rock Castle, Goochland County.
  • ref 1 says he furthered his education at Michigan and the General Motors Institute (whatever that us) if we can find any more info about that
    • I'm not seeing it, could you provide a quote?
      • oops sry i mean ref 3
        • Added.
  • Should we link telethon if that's actually what it means?
    • Linked.
  • "becoming in 1972 the state's" comma after 1972
    • Added.
  • Link Cambria County in body
    • Linked.

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 22:17, 19 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 00:30, 25 October 2023 (UTC)Reply