Talk:Moto Hagio/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Benji man (talk · contribs) 18:14, 26 November 2022 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Great article! Besides the text, I thought the illustrations in particular were exceptionally good.

I have a few questions about referencing:

• Brient (2013) seems to take most of his factual data from another article, cited in his first footnote. Would it be better to refer to that directly for those facts?
  • Per their footnote, it looks like Brient is pulling from a few sources in addition to the Thorn article. For simplicity's sake, I think it might be best to keep it as-is. Morgan695 (talk) 22:49, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
• I had the impression that not all of the events in the Biography section were sourced. Did I miss those references? If not, they should be added (or certain details should be removed).
  • Re-stated some references for clarity's sake. Morgan695 (talk) 22:49, 2 December 2022 (UTC)

This should be easy enough to fix, so I'm putting the review on hold for 7 days. Good luck!

Hi, thanks for taking up this review. I've acquired a copy of The 50th Anniversary of The Poe Clan and the World of Moto Hagio and am going to use it to update the list of works in the article; I'll ping you once I've done that and implemented your other notes. Morgan695 (talk) 18:48, 30 November 2022 (UTC)

@Benji man: Hi, response above. Morgan695 (talk) 22:49, 2 December 2022 (UTC)