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Travel guide
editHello. I was cleaning up the article and came to the "Hotels and restaurants" section. I believe this entire section needs to be cut because, imho, this is exactly what WP:NOTTRAVEL was made to stop. If a couple of these are notable, then they may be able to be worked into the article, but this list really is too much. Thoughts? Apparition11 (talk) 14:23, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
(edit)On second thought, the same probably goes for everything under Mumbra#Education except for the schools. I'll also note that I removed the addresses and phone numbers for the schools, I would've done this for everything else, but since I don't think any of the rest belong, it would possibly be work for nothing and I don't have a lot of time. Thanks. Apparition11 (talk) 15:06, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
(edit again)OK, I removed the other addresses while I was trying to cleanup a lot of language and grammar. I also removed a lot of WP:PEACOCK words and statements that made it read like a brochure. Apparition11 (talk) 19:03, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
Demographics section
editTranslation issues in Demographics Section
Please consider the following revisions to the English text:
1) Translate "9 Lakhs" to "900,000" 2) Capitalize Thane in "Thane urban agglomeration". 3) Precede Thane with a definite article: "the Thane urban agglomeration".
Mainstream Problem:
editsince long time Mumbra is suffering from many issue consistently such as temporary hawker zone, illegal parking on main road. Maximum time traffic found due to no proper hawker zone, no proper parking areas.
Drugs in young generation promoted & sale by old player including women.
water issue