Talk:Neminath Jain Temple, Girnar

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Nizil Shah in topic History

Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: withdrawn by nominator, closed by BorgQueen (talk18:00, 24 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

  • ... that Indian king Mandalika I gilded the Neminath Jain Temple on Girnar hill with gold plates? Source: Diskalkar, D. B. (June 1940). "Inscriptions Of Kathiawad: No. 77". New Indian Antiquary. Vol. 2. pp. 116–117.
  • Dhaky, M. A. (1997). Shah, Jitendra B. (ed.). મહાતીર્થ ઉજ્જયન્તગિરિ (ગિરનાર તીર્થ) [Mahatirtha UjjayantGiri (Girnar Tirtha)] (in Gujarati). Ahmedabad: Sheth Anandji Kalyanji.

Created by Nizil Shah (talk). Self-nominated at 17:10, 19 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Neminath Jain Temple, Girnar; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Approved. --3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 00:25, 11 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

  • @Nizil Shah: thank you for the nice article, but I'm afraid it isn't eligible, as I've explained on the DYK discussion page. Please consider submitting the article to GA, and if it passes it'll become eligible for DYK. Would you like to withdraw this nomination? BorgQueen (talk) 16:03, 22 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

Words not familiar to the average English speaker

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There are many words in this article that are not meaningful to the ordinary English speaker. Most readers will not even know what language they are, but they mostly look like technical terms relating to Jain and possibly other Indian temple architecture and religious matters. Please provide links to an explanation or provide the explanation in the article for each one where it is not obvious from the context what it means. A glossary may be appropriate. · · · Peter Southwood (talk): 05:31, 25 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

Pinging Nizil Shah for attention. · · · Peter Southwood (talk): 05:44, 25 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

History

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I'm copyediting this article and I'm a bit confused by the History portion - did he initially approve the funding, and then spend the money, without first receiving direct authorization from the king? and then the king didn't get upset about it but was instead glad the temple was built? Just double-checking that that is indeed the correct connotation, because I don't have any of the cited sources here in front of me to check myself. Alexcs114 :) 06:29, 11 June 2023 (UTC)Reply

Like, it seems to me that he approved the spending after the temple was already built, which doesn't make much sense. A LOT more detail is needed here. Alexcs114 :) 06:31, 11 June 2023 (UTC)Reply
Thank you for copyediting.
  • Sajjana, the governor appointed by king, built the temple using state fund without authorization. When king came to know about it and visited the temple, Sajjana told him that the temple is named after king's father Karna. So the king was pleased and he approved the spending of state funds. As an alternative, if king had not approved the spending, Sajjana had told Jains of Vanthali to raise the funding to be ready for return to state treasury. Hope it clarifies.
  • You have removed Vikram Samvat dates. These dates were related to inscriptions and literary works. Was it necessary? It was cluttering the article but I had kept as seemed important to me.
Regards,- Nizil (talk) 20:13, 28 August 2023 (UTC)Reply