Talk:New York State Route 33A

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Racepacket in topic GA Review
Good articleNew York State Route 33A has been listed as one of the Engineering and technology good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
January 11, 2011Good article nomineeListed

Change of Intersection Template

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This article was changed to bring its intersection template to the NYint format. No other changes were made. It is important to verify, update and/or correct as necessary.Fwgoebel 16:51, 28 November 2006 (UTC)Reply

Assessment

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I reassessed this article as Start-class instead of B-class. One sentence of history isn't enough to qualify for B-class. If nothing happened after the 1930s, talk about what happened before the 1930s then. What was it before it became NY 33A? -- Kéiryn talk 20:20, 19 May 2008 (UTC)Reply

Resolved. – TMF 09:11, 26 July 2009 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:New York State Route 33A/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Racepacket (talk) 00:29, 8 January 2011 (UTC) This is obviously the product of careful work. No disamb. links or broken links.Reply

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    what does "near the neighborhood of Lincoln Park" mean? In what neighborhood is the 33-33A junction located?
    Removed not because it's bad wording, but because that name is rarely used anymore. – TMF 08:02, 10 January 2011 (UTC)Reply
    "NY 33A progresses onward, heading northeast through a residential neighborhood"->"NY 33A progresses northeast through a residential neighborhood"
    Done, with a slight modification. – TMF 08:02, 10 January 2011 (UTC)Reply
    "The activity is mostly centered around Westgate Plaza, a large shopping plaza featuring a Wal-Mart at the junction of Chili Avenue, Howard Road[3] (unsigned NY 940L and formerly part of NY 47[4][5]) and Brooks Avenue."->"The businesses are centered around Westgate Plaza, a large shopping plaza featuring a Wal-Mart, that is at the junction of Chili Avenue, Howard Road[3] (unsigned NY 940L and formerly part of NY 47[4][5]) and Brooks Avenue."
    Reworded. – TMF 08:02, 10 January 2011 (UTC)Reply
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
    Are there any plans for future construction or improvements?
    If there were any substantial future plans, they would be in the article already. – TMF 08:02, 10 January 2011 (UTC)Reply
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    Nice photos. Thank you for donating them.
    The first one isn't mine; it's from a Flickr user. – TMF 08:02, 10 January 2011 (UTC)Reply
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    I am placing the article on hold.

Congratulations. Racepacket (talk) 16:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)Reply