Talk:New York State Route 33A/GA1
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Racepacket in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Racepacket (talk) 00:29, 8 January 2011 (UTC) This is obviously the product of careful work. No disamb. links or broken links.
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- what does "near the neighborhood of Lincoln Park" mean? In what neighborhood is the 33-33A junction located?
- Removed not because it's bad wording, but because that name is rarely used anymore. – TMF 08:02, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
- "NY 33A progresses onward, heading northeast through a residential neighborhood"->"NY 33A progresses northeast through a residential neighborhood"
- Done, with a slight modification. – TMF 08:02, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
- "The activity is mostly centered around Westgate Plaza, a large shopping plaza featuring a Wal-Mart at the junction of Chili Avenue, Howard Road[3] (unsigned NY 940L and formerly part of NY 47[4][5]) and Brooks Avenue."->"The businesses are centered around Westgate Plaza, a large shopping plaza featuring a Wal-Mart, that is at the junction of Chili Avenue, Howard Road[3] (unsigned NY 940L and formerly part of NY 47[4][5]) and Brooks Avenue."
- Reworded. – TMF 08:02, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
- what does "near the neighborhood of Lincoln Park" mean? In what neighborhood is the 33-33A junction located?
- a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- Are there any plans for future construction or improvements?
- If there were any substantial future plans, they would be in the article already. – TMF 08:02, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
- Are there any plans for future construction or improvements?
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Nice photos. Thank you for donating them.
- The first one isn't mine; it's from a Flickr user. – TMF 08:02, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
- Nice photos. Thank you for donating them.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- I am placing the article on hold.
- Pass/Fail:
Congratulations. Racepacket (talk) 16:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)