Talk:Nick Holden/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 00:21, 16 May 2020 (UTC)

Why not. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 00:21, 16 May 2020 (UTC)

• Ref 1 needs capitalization and publisher. Done
• St. Albert should be linked in the lead.  Done
• "plumper" Plumber?  Done
• Don't think you need to write Canada, the country is implied with the province and city.  Done
• You should add |via=Newspapers.com for those refs that use it. Done

• Same for NewspaperArchive refs. Done

• Ref 3 has authors.  Done
• I assume there is a typo from Ref 3 regard his high school's name.  Done
• You can specify that he was a hockey referee.  Done
• Link minor ice hockey for bantam.  Done
• "without trying out for the team" Trying out for a team.  Done
• Here's a desktop site for ref 5.  Done
• SJHL should be written out.  Done
• "if hockey did not pan out" Maybe expand to "if his hockey career did not pan out"?  Done

Continuing tomorrow. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:49, 19 May 2020 (UTC)

• "6 foot 3 and weighing 200 pounds" {{convert}} needed. Done
• "2007 National Hockey League (NHL)" Don't need to write out NHL here.  Done
• |via=Pressreader for ref 10.
• "Although" WP:EDITORIAL. Done
• Ref 18 has an author. Done
• "He earned his first NHL call up during the 2010–11 season" Don't see this in source.  Done
• Ref 20 has an author.  Done
• Ref 24 doesn't load any text. Done
• Ref 27 has an author. Done
• Ref 29 too, and the title does not match the one on the site. Done

• "He also led all Avalanche defenceman with three goals and four points in their Western Conference Quarter-final series defeat in the 2014 Stanley Cup playoffs against the Minnesota Wild." Also not in source (the point/assist).  Done

• "teammatess" Done
• "Holdan" and "Holdon" Done
• "preventing him from becoming an unrestricted free agent at the end of the 2019–20 season." Not in source. Done
• The section just for charity work seems unnecessary. Done
• The lead can always be longer, doesn't seem to have much of his professional career.

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 23:00, 19 May 2020 (UTC)