Talk:Nick Holden/GA1

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Nova Crystallis in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 00:21, 16 May 2020 (UTC)Reply


Why not. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 00:21, 16 May 2020 (UTC)Reply

  • Ref 1 needs capitalization and publisher.  Done
  • St. Albert should be linked in the lead.   Done
  • "plumper" Plumber?   Done
  • Don't think you need to write Canada, the country is implied with the province and city.   Done
  • You should add |via=Newspapers.com for those refs that use it.  Done
  • Same for NewspaperArchive refs.  Done
  • Ref 3 has authors.   Done
  • I assume there is a typo from Ref 3 regard his high school's name.   Done
  • You can specify that he was a hockey referee.   Done
  • Link minor ice hockey for bantam.   Done
  • "without trying out for the team" Trying out for a team.   Done
  • Here's a desktop site for ref 5.   Done
  • SJHL should be written out.   Done
  • "if hockey did not pan out" Maybe expand to "if his hockey career did not pan out"?   Done

Continuing tomorrow. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:49, 19 May 2020 (UTC)Reply

  • "6 foot 3 and weighing 200 pounds" {{convert}} needed.  Done
  • "2007 National Hockey League (NHL)" Don't need to write out NHL here.   Done
  • |via=Pressreader for ref 10.
  • "Although" WP:EDITORIAL.  Done
  • Ref 18 has an author.  Done
  • "He earned his first NHL call up during the 2010–11 season" Don't see this in source.   Done
  • Ref 20 has an author.   Done
  • Ref 24 doesn't load any text.  Done
  • Ref 27 has an author.  Done
  • Ref 29 too, and the title does not match the one on the site.  Done
  • "He also led all Avalanche defenceman with three goals and four points in their Western Conference Quarter-final series defeat in the 2014 Stanley Cup playoffs against the Minnesota Wild." Also not in source (the point/assist).   Done
  • "teammatess"  Done
  • "Holdan" and "Holdon"  Done
  • "preventing him from becoming an unrestricted free agent at the end of the 2019–20 season." Not in source.  Done
  • The section just for charity work seems unnecessary.  Done
  • The lead can always be longer, doesn't seem to have much of his professional career.

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 23:00, 19 May 2020 (UTC)Reply