Talk:Nicky Case

Latest comment: 1 year ago by LightNightLights in topic Phrasing

Phrasing

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I'm unsure what the "it" at the end of "Case's first entry into the gaming industry was an internship at Electronic Arts (EA). With the help of a Newgrounds game made by Case, it became widely popular." I'm also fairly certain the game being alluded to was :the game: but that's probably original research. Regardless, :the game: was a really popular (for a Flash) game which Case made two sequels to, so it probably deserves to be mentioned in some capacity. 2601:1C2:4E00:EBC0:0:0:0:A65D (talk) 04:44, 7 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

I originally wrote that sentence as "Case's first entry into the gaming industry was an internship at Electronic Arts (EA), with the help of a Newgrounds game made by Case that went viral" and it was changed by @Rebel Wolf-7 (a ping to notify) in this edit. I've undone the change since I think my version is clearer and is not ambiguous about what "it" is.
The game being alluded to is indeed :the game: but I didn't mention its name because the name feels like trivial information. I can't find any sources that discuss it or its sequels in at least some detail; even the currently used source only links to it and doesn't mention it by name. LightNightLights (talkcontribs) 14:05, 9 November 2023 (UTC)Reply