Talk:Nikki Flores

Latest comment: 5 years ago by EvanJ35 in topic Song "Suffocate" Isn't Mentioned

POV issues

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I can't comment on the notability of this person, since I know next to nothing about her, but I feel that the Biography section has manifold neutrality issues (as well as some minor syntax error, such as "was planned" and the final sentence beginning with "but"). Firstly, the paragraph refers to the subject as "prodigious", which qualifies as original research as well as an opinion (it's also unsourced, but it ain't alone in that respect). Words like "wowing", "youngster", and "honchos" are decidedly unencyclopaedic. More broadly, the article is wanting in the citation department. It either needs a total overhaul with more comprehensive references, or it needs to be deleted. Also, the entire Unreleased section is absolutely unnecessary (and, again, is without a citation). If no-one is willing to do this, or no-one has visited this page within a couple of days, I might give a shot myself. 124.176.23.248 (talk) 06:15, 17 January 2011 (UTC)Reply

Issues in this article as of Feb 2018

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Song "Suffocate" Isn't Mentioned

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Her song "Suffocate" can be heard at https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3oQu9sS6uXc but it isn't on this page. EvanJ35 (talk) 02:47, 16 February 2019 (UTC)Reply