Talk:O ewiges Feuer, o Ursprung der Liebe, BWV 34/GA1

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 05:12, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

Hi, I can do this today. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 05:12, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• You may like to link alto, oboes, continuo

yes but better in Baroque instruments, ok, alto yes --GA

• What are the "both occasions"?

should "wedding and Pentecost" be repeated? --GA

Looks better now, you discussed it in the earlier paragraph, so it wasn't immediately clear what you were talking about. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:45, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

History and words

• I think it should be "Bach scholar", not "the Bach scholar".

That seems to be an American/English thing, - Tim would like the "the" ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:40, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

I think I didn't notice the "the" in your earlier articles. Tim riley seems to be away for a month. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:45, 4 May 2016 (UTC)

This lists some dead links : [1] @Gerda Arendt: I think we need dead URL templates here or search for new versions of the URLs. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 16:20, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

No, we don't - the links work fine if you click on them from the article. The problem is actually that Checklinks doesn't know how to parse links with square brackets in them. Nikkimaria (talk) 22:17, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for correcting me. Seeing no more issues, I am glad to promote this. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 04:51, 7 May 2016 (UTC)

That's it. Great job! Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:42, 4 May 2016 (UTC)