Talk:Ollie Hopnoodle's Haven of Bliss
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WP:FILM Assessment
editI recently re-assessed the article from Stub to C class. For the article to reach B-class, it currently needs to complete the criteria for citing (first criterion) and grammar/style (criterion four). Although the article is well-sourced already, look again to make sure if there are any other potential sources that can be added for the article as well as for further expanding it. Take a look at Wikipedia:WikiProject Film/Resources for potential sites for additional sourcing. For the fourth criterion, give the article a quick read-over and make sure it flows smoothly. For the plot section, it shouldn't be self-referential, so remove instances of "the film" (for the beginning of the section consider "In the blue-collar...") The lead should also be expanded to touch on all of the sections within the article. Single sentences shouldn't stand alone, either expand on them or incorporate them into another paragraph. Film titles linked within the article should be italicized. As a television film in the 1990s, I'm sure it is difficult to find sourcing, so if nothing else is found beyond what is currently listed, and the above grammar/style issues are addressed, the article can be assessed as B. --Happy editing! Nehrams2020 (talk • contrib) 03:54, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks. I was going a bit improvement-blind. --Lexein (talk) 06:08, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
Pullman, IN
editIn Ollie Hopnoodle's Haven of Bliss, the family's hometown is named "Pullman, Indiana" by the narrator, Jean Shepherd. Coincidentally, in Hammond, Indiana, Shepherds's childhood hometown, there exists the Pullman-Standard Historic District[1], founded by the Pullman rail car manufacturing company. The film's fictitious "Pullman, Indiana" may be based on the district, or the company. Seeking RS. --Lexein (talk) 06:08, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
- Lexein, Does he say "Pullman" or "Hohman"? The three Clark-Kaytis Ralphie films use Hohman, Indiana, as their setting, and I was curious if "Pullman" may have been a mishearing of "Hohman" (they kind of rhyme). I haven't seen the four Barzyk-Bartlett Ralphie films (but want to), but have been trying to glean any information about them to see how they differ (for example in the B-B films, Ralphie seems to have been born sometime after 1935, but in the C-K films Ralphie was born in 1931). If the Barzyk-Bartlett films have him living in Pullman, that would be another difference between each set of films. — al-Shimoni (talk) 11:20, 26 December 2022 (UTC)