Jargon example: "digital experience platform software as a service" is incredibly vague. This means nothing to anyone.
Pitch for capital example: The other 90% of the text
If the criteria for a page is that the average reader will learn something about what the subject means, its importance, its context, they will be disappointed. This is why I came here, to find out who Optimizely is, and why they're attempting to track my online behavior. However, this page is for investors, current and potential. It's really not worthy of Wikipedia as is. There may be many other pages like this, but this is the one I came across and was compelled to leave a note. ArtemisXLVII (talk) 16:34, 26 December 2022 (UTC)Reply
- Not to put too fine a point on it, but Optimizely is a player in the surreptitious mining of people's behavior online for sale to the companies they sell their services to. Most people are unaware that parties, such as Optimizely are looking into their lives from the the server side -- actively recording their behavior and selling it on. Doesn't seem quite right. ArtemisXLVII (talk) 16:47, 26 December 2022 (UTC)Reply