Talk:Pero Qué Necesidad/GA2
Latest comment: 5 months ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Nominator: Magiciandude (talk · contribs) 17:48, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:07, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a. (reference section):
- b. (citations to reliable sources):
- c. (OR):
- d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a. (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a. (major aspects):
- b. (focused):
- a. (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/fail:
- Pass/fail:
(Criteria marked are unassessed)
Of course we've been in reviews together for the past so you know what to expect; this one should be done quickly! --K. Peake 08:07, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
edit- Change Soundabout Studio to Soundabout per Template:Infobox song
- The translation title can be written out in the body, rather than invoking the ref in the lead
- "Its production was handled by" → "The song was produced by" and also add written by Juan Gabriel since the lead is short enough that you could do with this inclusion
- "The song is a" → "It is a" to sound less repetitive
- "It was released" → "The song was released"
- "with critics listing" → "with a few critics listing"
- The term "several" being used is redundant
- Add a comma before whose in the last sentence
Background and composition
edit- Add the release year of "Heal the World" on the audio sample
- "a hiatus following legal disputes" → "a hiatus after legal disputes"
- "The dispute involved Gabriel" → "The dispute involved Juan Gabriel" to be consistent
- "but would not be released" → "but it would not be released"
- "and Gabriel renewed his" → "and Juan Gabriel renewed his"
- "both the name of the album" → "both the album's title of" removing the brackets since they would not be needed in this case
- "in which lyrics describes" → "in which the lyrics describe"
- "He re-recorded the track" → "Juan Gabriel re-recorded the track"
Promotion and reception
edit- Per the Los Angeles Times ref currently used in the lead, add a second sentence with the translated title and mention the Spanish radio from that ref
- "brotherhood". It features children" → "brotherhood", featuring children" to improve the flow
- "Ramiro Burr wrote for the" → "Ramiro Burr, writing for the"
- "compared it to ABBA" → "compared the song to ABBA"
- "despite its "serious theme", he found it" → "despite the "serious theme", he found the song"
- "Classic Rock reviewer ranked it" → "a Classic Rock reviewer ranked the song" and the source shows number seven for me, not number three
- "Gabriel earned the" → "Juan Gabriel earned the"
- "Commercially, it topped" → "Commercially, the track topped"
Charts
edit- Why is this table not present when the song did reach charts?
See also
edit- Good
References
edit- Copyvio score looks fab at 21.3%!!!
- Cite Classic Rock as magazine instead on ref 2
- Wikilink La Tercera on ref 7
- Wikilink Austin American-Statesman on ref 8
- El Diario NY → El Diario New York and pipe to El Diario La Prensa on ref 9
- Remove AllMusic from the title of ref 11
- Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine) on ref 12
- Pipe Proceso to Proceso (magazine) on ref 16
- For ref 21 and the prose, be consistent with either Singersroom or SingersRoom
- Cite Univision as publisher instead on ref 22, removing Univision Communications altogether
- Wikilink Prometheus Global Media on ref 23
- Wikilink La Prensa de San Antonio on ref 27
Final thoughts and verdict
edit- On hold until everything is covered; this article passes a lot of the criterion but some changes are needed to get it over the line! --K. Peake 08:48, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Kyle Peake Thanks as always for the reviews! I addressed everything mentioned, but I wasn't sure what you meant with the LA Times article for the translation so I did the best as I understood. Erick (talk) 23:50, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Erick Thank you, however "compared it to ABBA" needs to use the song instead and wikilink La Tercera on ref 7; the translation source is exactly to my liking fab job! --K. Peake 09:12, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Kyle Peake Done Erick (talk) 15:39, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
- ✓ Pass now, thanks for the quick fixes here! --K. Peake 17:26, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Kyle Peake Done Erick (talk) 15:39, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Erick Thank you, however "compared it to ABBA" needs to use the song instead and wikilink La Tercera on ref 7; the translation source is exactly to my liking fab job! --K. Peake 09:12, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Kyle Peake Thanks as always for the reviews! I addressed everything mentioned, but I wasn't sure what you meant with the LA Times article for the translation so I did the best as I understood. Erick (talk) 23:50, 2 June 2024 (UTC)