Talk:Peruvian cruiser Lima/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Simongraham (talk · contribs) 01:24, 1 September 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 21:51, 8 September 2024 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:51, 8 September 2024 (UTC)

Thank you. I look forward to your comments. simongraham (talk) 04:50, 9 September 2024 (UTC)

• Image properly licensed
• Armed with two 6 in (152 mm) guns, on commissioning, the cruiser was the flagship and largest vessel in the Peruvian fleet. In 1901, the armament was upgraded. awkward
  • Reworded.
• Link Ecuador
  • Added.
• Does the ship have any kind of armor? If not, then she's an unprotected cruiser.
  • The sources have no detail about armor. Updated the links.
• Fix the draught figure in the main body; the figures for length and beam don't match between the infobox and main body
  • Fixed and referenced.
• Any idea why such a lengthy amount of time between completion and service entry?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 08:56, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Added a bit of explanation.

@Sturmvogel 66: Thank you for this review. Please take a look at my edits and tell me if there is anything else. simongraham (talk) 15:12, 27 September 2024 (UTC)