Talk:Philippine resistance against Japan/GA2

GA Reassessment

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I actually had a few more comments to the original GA review, but accidentally passed it. Here are my last few comments on prose.

Prose

• The second sentence in the lead is poorly worded. I'd suggest sth like Apart from the Japanese regular forces, the Japanese-formed Bureau of Constabulary (later taking the name of the old Philippine Constabulary in 1943), the Kempeitai, and the Makapili fought against the guerrillas.
• Is the first paragraph in the body really necessary?
• "nom de guerre" is unclear, like it more clearly to the section.
• "aide", typo I assume.

*There are also few grammatical issues, for example:

• "also have their own groups of guerrillas fighting the Japanese invaders"
• "also occurred much in Leyte before the arrival of..."
• guerrilla units, of which Ramon Magsaysay was included"
• "benefited from the bill but only the Philippines were not allowed to be granted by such."

Referencing

• I've already found two instances of a cited reference not saying anything in support of the sentence(s) preceding it. It's like they belong against some other text entirely. At this rate, there could be more which are in some way faulty. I think the article should be quickly ratcheted back to B-class until more work is done to verify and fix. GraemeLeggett (talk) 20:40, 13 September 2015 (UTC)

• I'll be working overtime to fix the article into regular shape.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 21:18, 13 September 2015 (UTC)

How's it going

It's been awhile. Just if the assessment is still alive. Grammar was fixed and new citations have been added. Anything else that needs fixing? Godzilladude123 (talk) 12:05, 31 December 2015 (UTC)

Tomandjerry211 (or the Tomandjerry211 (alt) account), this is now over eleven months old. Please respond here at your next opportunity, and either close it as kept or note what's left to be fixed. (If you'd prefer, I'm happy to close it for you.) If more fixes are needed, I can notify Godzilladude123 and/or the various WikiProjects in the hopes of finding someone who's willing to do them. Many thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:15, 18 August 2016 (UTC)

• I completely forgot about this. Could you please close it for me because I need to do a few other things. Thanks, --Tomandjerry311 (need to talk?) 15:52, 18 August 2016 (UTC)

Final comment

Closed as "kept" per request of Tomandjerry311, who opened this reassessment. BlueMoonset (talk) 17:15, 18 August 2016 (UTC)