Talk:Pierpaolo Donati

Latest comment: 11 days ago by Boredintheevening in topic Needs rewriting

Needs rewriting

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Really interesting article, but big problems with voice/perspective throughout. I suspect that this has been written by someone very familiar with the subject person. Needs to be rewritten for a biographical style, needs to be clearer for non experts, and seriously needs greater integration of sources/citations for claims.Boredintheevening (talk) 15:19, 8 September 2024 (UTC)Reply