Talk:Poedjangga Baroe/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by GreatOrangePumpkin in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 19:24, 11 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

I will review this article. At first glance it meets the GA criteria.

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    Lead:
    "as well as requests to ten sultanates for support" - I think we can leave out "requests", but I am not sure...
    Background:
    Suggest linking of "feudal"
    'Publication
    Might want to eliminate "published" in "In the prospectus for the soon-to-be published Poedjangga Baroe," to avoid repetition
    Politics
    "Marxist", "fascism", "sonnet" should be linked imho
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
    Book 1 needs language parameter
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall: Just few minor fixes.
    Pass/Fail:  
Thanks. I am passing this interesting article as it clearly meets the GA criteria, if not the FA criteria. Regards and great work on Indonesia-related articles! :)--GoPTCN 08:07, 12 June 2012 (UTC)Reply