Talk:Possession (1981 film)

Latest comment: 4 months ago by Nyxaros in topic Poster by Barbara Baranowska, aka Basha

Neutral point of view

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"Andrzej Żuławski delivers a masterpiece cult movie" doesn't seem like a good way to start a neutral article about a film. There may be more. Would somebody please take a look? --Tony Sidaway 12:29, 28 January 2008 (UTC)Reply

It seems this statement has been changed to a more neutral point of view which seems satisfactory and can be accurately cited from a variety of sources. TGTommyrocket (talk) 07:04, 10 March 2012 (UTC)TGTommyrocket (talk) 07:04, 10 March 2012 (UTC)Reply

Plot Summary

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I am going to attempt a plot summary on this least narrative of films because while it is mostly a surreal examination of a dissolving marriage, it does have plot points which will be of interest to readers. TGTommyrocket (talk) 08:22, 29 January 2012 (UTC) TGTommyrocketReply

Seemingly in disregard of my TALK message on 29 Jan 2012, Doctorhawkes has attempted a summary. Because the summary is so badly written, inaccurate, and riddled with grammatical and syntactical errors, I have conflated it with my own, removing the bad grammar and unimportant details, fixing syntax and correcting plot errors. I have replaced it with a more objective plot summary which does not misinterpret events and which describes plot incidents rather than interprets them. TGTommyrocket (talk) 07:03, 1 February 2012 (UTC) TGTommyrocketReply

Crystal Castles videoclip

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The movie is featured in a videoclip from the band Crystal Castles. The videoclip is called "Plague".

Tweet

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Is citing the tweet from Red Letter Media really needed in this case? It adds no information about the film. It only indicates that a single critic liked the film. Unless there are any objections, I'm going to remove it. Webster100 (talk) 22:48, 29 April 2015 (UTC)Reply

The sentence about the tweet has been removed Webster100 (talk) 18:23, 5 May 2015 (UTC)Reply

Expand Production Section

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This article's production section is way too short and needs to be expanded in more detail than what it currently has. More information on the film's production should be added to the article since compared to the other sections it is the most underdeveloped, making expansion necessary so that it is more balanced with the rest of the article.--Paleface Jack (talk) 19:46, 30 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

Here are some links to some interviews with the director/cast on the film that we can use:--Paleface Jack (talk) 16:57, 10 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

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Genre

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I've adjusted the genres to only match what is written specifically in the article per WP:RS, WP:OR and WP:STICKTOSOURCE. This removed some other genres which I could not see written anywhere in the prose in full or abbreviated formats. If I'm missing anything, please fill in the blanks. I'd be happy to go into a deep dive for seeking out how the film is interpreted genre wise. Andrzejbanas (talk) 21:04, 12 January 2023 (UTC)Reply

I found some sources that describes the film as "psychological horror"
1. https://nofilmschool.com/possession-andrzej-zulawski
2. https://collider.com/why-was-possession-banned-explained/
3. https://www.slashfilm.com/1203963/sam-neill-says-slapping-isabelle-adjani-in-possession-was-the-most-distressing-thing-hes-ever-done-on-film/
I don’t know if these you would consider these sources reliable, but I think it’s enough to be classified as a psychological horror film. If not, I think it would at least be better sounding to merge the two genres together in a sentence say "a horror drama film" instead of saying it’s a "drama film and a horror film" or a "psychological drama and horror film." Valddlac (talk) 00:13, 22 February 2023 (UTC)Reply
It's not that they are good sources or not, but we shouldn't just hunt for a genre we feel the film belongs to. If we really want to apply it, I'd just look through reviews or critical/scholarly commentary on the film (just so we know the person in question has actually seen the film) and try to find out the general consensus or more commonly applied term is for the genre that way. Andrzejbanas (talk) 07:32, 23 February 2023 (UTC)Reply


GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 06:49, 11 January 2023 (UTC)Reply

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
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    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
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    b (citations to reliable sources):  
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    d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
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    b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
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There is not much to do. The quality of this page is high, and it just needs tightening. It's been so long your eyes might be fresh; you may find more. 7-day hold to Nyxaros. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 07:09, 11 January 2023 (UTC)Reply

Copy changes

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  • she is a gentle character, and does not demand anything from Mark This comma isn't needed; see User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences (CinS)
  • allusion (the sounds of sirens and the rumble of explosions) on the I think allusion to would be more idiomatic.
  • Thompson suggested Frederic Tuten, thus Żuławski went to New York to meet him Change the comma to a semicolon and add a comma after "thus"
  • Remove the "the" in In 1976, he divorced the actress Malgorzata Braunek.
  • Carlo Rambaldi, the famous Italian special effects artist maybe "a famed Italian special effects artist"
  • The Philadelphia Daily News's Joe Baltake deemed the film a "boringly camp-elegante attempt by a group of reputable French, German and Polish filmmakers," and assessed Adjani's performance as "babbling, incoherent yet arresting."
    • Remove the comma after "filmmakers"
    • Move the period after "arresting" outside of the quotation marks (MOS:INOROUT). When you quote a sentence fragment, the period goes outside of the quotations. (This recurs a few more times with sentence fragments)

Sourcing and spot checks

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Aside from two sites copying us (one being Metacritic itself), the highest Earwig percentage.

Five sources were chosen for spot checks.

  • 2: Box Office Mojo is used for the US box office figures, which are correct.  Y
  • 9: Goddard 2017 is used four times. The increasingly desperate attempts on Marc’s part to hold onto his family, however contaminated or distorted it might be by evil and unfathomable forces, is the masked expression of a real struggle and a real loss not only of Żuławski’s family but also of the violent wrenching from his former social context.  Y This source's citation should be expanded. His CV lists it (reproduced after this bulleted list). It appears to be the same one that already has an SFN set tied to it. This is apparently a chapter in the volume.
  • 20: Attribute this quote in-text to Tom Huddleston, but it's there.  Y
  • 29: Citation of ASIN number proves volume's existence.  Y
  • 32: Quote from Schwartz is faithfully reproduced.  Y

Goddard, M N. 2014. Beyond Polish Moral Realism: The Subversive Cinema of Andrzej Żuławski. In: Ewa Mazierska and M N Goddard, eds. Polish Cinema in a Transnational Context. Rochester NY, Woodbridge: University of Rochester Press/Boydell & Brewer, pp. 236-257. ISBN 9781580464680

Other items

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  • The plot summary is 690 words long, at the high end but within the 400–700 word range of MOS:PLOT.
  • Run IABot to archive any unarchived references. (Some aren't, most are.)
  • The film poster has a valid NFUR, and the 1977 image of the Berlin Wall is libre licensed. I recommend adding alt text.
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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by BorgQueen (talk02:06, 23 January 2023 (UTC)Reply

Improved to Good Article status by Nyxaros (talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke (talk) at 22:30, 18 January 2023 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
QPQ: Done.
Overall:   Elevated to good article status within last week. Multiple inline citations for the hook. QPQ done. This should be good to go. Makeandtoss (talk) 11:31, 21 January 2023 (UTC)Reply

Poster by Barbara Baranowska, aka Basha

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@Nyxaros: The French version of the film poster, used in the article, was created by one of the members of the Polish Poster School movement, one of the few who was female. This poster is one of her most well-known works. This information should be reflected in the article, or at least the illustration's description. WP:RED states that "In general, a red link should remain in an article if there is a reasonable expectation that the article in question will eventually be created (either as its own article or as a redirect); remove red links if and only if Wikipedia should not have any coverage on the subject." I had indicated there would be an article on her forthcoming, and leaving red links in general help other task forces like WP:Women in Red to contribute articles about hard-to-find historical figures. Some discussion of her notability: https://web.archive.org/web/20230610115101/https://www.thefirstnews.com/article/the-forgotten-siren-of-polish-poster-art-barbara-baranowska-25391 https://www.new-east-archive.org/articles/show/13170/barbara-baranowska-polish-poster-artist-women-recollected https://culture.pl/en/article/basha-the-polish-poster-schools-most-reluctant-member LovelyLillith (talk) 18:13, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Only one ref was added to the infobox on the page, and the link was left there after an indication that the page would be created. The referenced information should not be added to the infobox in this way and should be included in the relevant section as well. I don't think that the other two references are sufficient either, at least until there is a consensus that these three websites prove her notability and are reliable. ภץאคгöร 18:43, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply