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editExpanded article somewhat about what makes the Provo Temple unique. Added links about the basics of Mormon temple worship. Amaranth22
Moroni?
editJust looked at the official website. High-res picture there shows no statue on the spire; makes me wonder if this was a prank addition. Could someone post a photo on this page before I decide to delete the (currently) unsupported statement about Moroni statue? Unschool 20:09, 14 May 2006 (UTC)
- Okay, now I see that the second link does show the statue, but the first does not. What gives? Which is the "official" site? Unschool
Original Temple Picture
editIt would be nice to include a picture before and after the renovations that added the Moroni to the temple (and include discussion of the change). Daw44 (talk) 16:24, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
Escalators
editI had remembered there being escalators in the Provo Temple when I was at the MTC in late 1999. After a session in August 2008, I asked a temple worker, and she confirmed that they had been removed a few years earlier and replaced with stairs. Escalators with layouts similar to those found previously in the Provo Temple can be seen in both the Seattle and Mexico City temples. Bobomejor (talk) 09:54, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
Images
editI erased the gallery, all the photos are in commons. They were at the time the only pictures available in commons so no need to place them in the article as well. I placed the only picture not uploaded in commons into the template, besides it doesn't have people in it. Bobjgalindo (talk) 15:49, 5 January 2009 (UTC)
Significant Changes
editHi, I have made some significant changes to the structure of the article in an attempt to improve its quality. In addition, I have added a paragraph about the function of the temple and rewritten the lead paragraph. There are still some significant additions that can be made if anyone has access to the book Provo's Two Temples by Richard Cowan. --Jmjosh90 04:59, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
Pillar of Fire Myth
editI changed the line about the Pillar of Fire symbolism and added a reference to show that it is a local myth. I provided a source https://photogent.com/provo-utah-temple/wiki/ which points out that it is a myth. There are sources that are for and against the idea. This was reverted supposedly because the original source supposedly said that it was a symbolic but that source doesn't say that either. It just says it has "long been viewed" as such. Jgstokes, is that good enough to show that it is a local myth and not a fact? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:680:CD82:BD0:E84D:6616:C845:F7E1 (talk) 01:30, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
- Photogent is not a reliable source for Wikipedia purposes as it is self-published. If you find something else from a reliable source that says this, and it meets the criteria for inclusion here, that would be acceptable. User:Jgstokes (talk)—We can disagree without becoming disagreeable. 01:45, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
- What about the fact that the source that is linked doesn't say that the temple was inspired by the scripture but instead it has "long been viewed". Would you be ok with changing the sentence to "It has long been viewed that the design of the temple ..."? That matches closer to what the source actually says. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:680:CD82:BD0:E84D:6616:C845:F7E1 (talk) 02:26, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
- That's kind of clunky as written. Perhaps "The temple's design has long been viewed" would work and flow better. User:Jgstokes (talk)—We can disagree without becoming disagreeable. 03:29, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
- What about the fact that the source that is linked doesn't say that the temple was inspired by the scripture but instead it has "long been viewed". Would you be ok with changing the sentence to "It has long been viewed that the design of the temple ..."? That matches closer to what the source actually says. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:680:CD82:BD0:E84D:6616:C845:F7E1 (talk) 02:26, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
- Interestingly enough, Emil Fetzer's page says almost the same thing but has no citation. Someone tagged it "citation needed" but no one has added one. I searched online for any source of either side and there isn't one. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:680:CD82:BD0:E84D:6616:C845:F7E1 (talk) 03:07, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
- Then I'd recommend what I suggested in the comment above for the adjusted wording. I will boldly change it to that for now, unless there are further objections or concerns. Thanks for being willing to discuss this. User:Jgstokes (talk)—We can disagree without becoming disagreeable. 03:31, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
- Interestingly enough, Emil Fetzer's page says almost the same thing but has no citation. Someone tagged it "citation needed" but no one has added one. I searched online for any source of either side and there isn't one. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:680:CD82:BD0:E84D:6616:C845:F7E1 (talk) 03:07, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
Renaming to Provo Utah Rock Canyon Temple
editHi Jgstokes, I reverted your article move because it was premature. The press release refers to the renaming as happening upon the temple's reopening (future tense) and the Church's official page for the temple still refers to it as the "Provo Utah Temple". All that being said, I appreciate your efforts to edit this article. Thank you! Jodapop (talk) 00:09, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
- With respect, there was nothing premature about the move, nor should it be controversial. The Church of Jesus Christ Temples site has been used for sourcing of many other temple updates, and that site has officially moved the Provo Utah Temple to the Provo Utah Rock Canyon Temple. This report, also from an often-cited source on Wikipedia temple pages, states that the "temple will be renamed as it prepares to close for reconstruction. Not when it reopens, but "as it prepares to close for reconstruction". That is supported here, here, and here, It's my understanding that when the current temple is demolished, the new one will be built a short distance away from where the original stood. I can find other sources on this, and I won't redo the move until there is consensus to do so, but I did my research before bolddly moving the page. I woulddn't have done that unless I had the sources to back it up. Hope that clarifies my reason for the move. Please feel free to let me know if more sources are needed to support/justify my actions. User:Jgstokes (talk)—We can disagree without becoming disagreeable. 01:03, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
- I see that you replied promptly to my first comment. I only saw it just now, so thank you for your patience. I respect your diligence and commitment to Wikipedia's guidelines, especially editing boldly and seeking consensus. I think we just happen to disagree on the interpretation of the sources.
- I don't have time at the moment, but I'm leaving this note so you know I'm not ignoring your comments. I will give a proper reply sometime in the next 48 hours, hopefully later tonight.
- All the best. Jodapop (talk) 21:12, 3 March 2024 (UTC)
Hi Jgstokes, thank you for clarifying your reasoning for moving the article when you did. I called the move premature because I can imagine future news reports referring to the currently-standing structure as the "Provo Utah Temple" when that structure is completely demolished. For example, "Demolition work on the Provo Utah Temple was completed this week ahead of its reconstruction. The new temple will be rededicated as the "Provo Utah Rock Canyon Temple". Using the old and new names to refer to the old and new buildings respectively makes sense, so having an article with the "Rock Canyon" name appear with a photo of the old building doesn't make sense to me.
As I see it, there isn't consensus about the timing of the temple's renaming. This is how I interpret each of the sources I found, including the sources you shared:
Source | Link | Quote | Interpretation |
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churchofjesuschrist.org | Provo Utah Temple | "Temple closed during renovation" | Webpage refers to "Provo Utah Temple" in the present tense. Yet to be renamed. |
thechurchnews.com | Provo Utah Temple will be renamed as it prepares to close for reconstruction | "During an upcoming renovation, the 52-year-old Provo Utah Temple will not only be redesigned and reconstructed, but will also be renamed." | Title suggests renaming before February 2024 closure, but article text refers to renaming after being closed. Ambiguous. |
Deseret News | The Provo Utah Temple has a new name | "The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints announced Tuesday that when the Provo Utah Temple reopens, it’ll be known as the Provo Utah Rock Canyon Temple." | Article refers to the "Provo Utah Temple" in the present tense and says the temple will be renamed upon reopening. Yet to be renamed. |
newsroom.churchofjesuschrist.org | The Provo Temple Will Reopen as the Provo Utah Rock Canyon Temple | "The Provo Utah Temple will close February 24, 2024, for reconstruction and will be renamed the Provo Utah Rock Canyon Temple." | Ambiguous about the timing of renaming. |
ABC 4 News | The Provo Utah Temple is getting a new name just days before it closes | "The temple, renamed the Provo Utah Rock Canyon Temple, will close this Saturday, Feb. 24." | Renamed before February 2024 closure. Already renamed. |
KUTV 2 News | Provo Utah Temple to undergo reconstruction, reopen as Provo Utah Rock Canyon Temple | "The Provo Utah Temple will soon close for reconstruction and be renamed the Provo Utah Rock Canyon Temple." | Title states the temple will "reopen as Provo Utah Rock Canyon Temple", but body text implies the renaming was coincident with the February 2024 closure. Ambiguous about the timing of renaming. |
Herald Extra | Rock Canyon Temple: Provo site will reopen with new name after reconstruction | "The Provo Utah Temple, which will begin reconstruction on Saturday, will be renamed the Provo Utah Rock Canyon Temple." | Ambiguous about the timing of renaming. |
churchofjesuschristtemples.org | Provo Utah Rock Canyon Temple | "The Provo Utah Rock Canyon Temple is a reconstruction of the Provo Temple, which was dedicated in 1972 and renamed the Provo Utah Temple in 1999." | Refers to the "Provo Temple" in the past tense and the "Provo Utah Rock Canyon Temple" in the present tense. Already renamed. |
LDS Living | The Provo Temple will be renamed after reconstruction | (same body text as newsroom.churchofjesuschrist.org) | Title states renaming will happen after reconstruction. Yet to be renamed |
This is how I see each title with regards to the five WP:CRITERIA characteristics:
Criterion | Provo Utah Temple | Provo Utah Rock Canyon Temple |
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Recognizability | Most recognizable | Unfamiliar, but not unclear |
Naturalness | Most natural | Not as natural |
Precision | Depends upon the timing of renaming | |
Concision | Concise, but Precision and Consistency override | Not concise, but Precision and Consistency override |
Consistency | Temple articles consistently match the official name of the temple, so this also depends upon the timing of renaming. |
Because of the ambiguity, we should keep the page at Provo Utah Temple for now. "Provo Utah Temple" is most natural. Anecdotally, most people in Provo who I ask hadn't heard about the name change, but those who had heard remembered the new name easily.
All of that being said, we should consider the option of two separate articles, perhaps one at Provo Temple (1972–2024) and another at Provo Utah Rock Canyon Temple, with Provo Utah Temple redirecting to the Rock Canyon article. This would not be consistent with Ogden Utah Temple, but that building was heavily renovated, whereas the Provo Temple will be entirely demolished and rebuilt, as I understand it. It would be consistent with Nauvoo Temple and Nauvoo Illinois Temple, but those two buildings were separated by 154 years. With the name change and such different architecture, I don't see why they shouldn't be separate articles, but now that discussion is open on the topic here, such a move shouldn't be done without consensus first.
With two separate articles, I would support moving the articles immediately. Otherwise, we should wait until further reporting that uses the "Rock Canyon" name. Jodapop (talk) 23:48, 5 March 2024 (UTC)
- With all due respect, "I can imagine future news reports referring to the currently-standing structure as the 'Provo Utah Temple' when that structure is completely demolished." is a personal conjectured opinion, which does not meet Wikipedia standards for inclusion. The Church Temples site has shifted the temple to the new name, and we use that source for some verifications on Wikipedia. That being said, I can see your point about the sources being somewhat ambiguous on this for now. And the Church's official list still shows it as the Provo Utah Temple. So we can keep it there for now. I might be in favor of creating separate pages for the Provo Utah and Provo Utah Rock Canyon Temples, but since they are the same edifice, and since the renamed temple will still have the same number as the temple it will be replacing, that makes separate articles a bit more difficult to maintain. If there's a way around that, separate articles might work. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and analysis. I appreciate your good-faith efforts as well. User:Jgstokes (talk)—We can disagree without becoming disagreeable. 22:21, 9 March 2024 (UTC)