Talk:Ratu (band)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 18:29, 4 July 2012 (UTC)

Interesting read. Prose is good and what helps is the article is well sourced. So kudos.

General

• No problems with sourcing, nor the reliabity.
• No issues with imaging.
• No dead links
• One dablink needs addressing
• Is it acceptable to use a YouTube link as a External link, per WP:YT and WP:EL

Lead

• "The group was dissolved permanently in 2007" 'was' is redundant, perfectly fine to remove it.
• "they were the first artist" as far as I'm aware of, artist refers to one person, should be artists, per plural

Career

• "Maia decided to form a duo, a singer and a musician" replace comma with colon
• "This situations was exacerbated" → This situation was exacerbated

Later activities

• "and by 2011 Korean-inspired boy and girl bands had become dominant" place comma between '2011' and 'Korean-inspired'

On hold. Lemonade51 (talk) 19:35, 4 July 2012 (UTC)

• Dab dealt with. RatuVEVO is an official feed, so there are no copyright concerns; should be acceptable.

Was removed, artist changed to musical act (allow the inclusion of solo artists as well), changed to "consisting of", oops, and done.

Thanks for the review! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:33, 4 July 2012 (UTC)