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A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
There are a lot of short paragraphs and the "life as an artist" section sounds a bit proseline-like. Also I don't think that the "(artist)" parenthetical is good style.
Two unsourced paragraphs. I cannot see all the sources but of these I see: I am not sure that #4 supports all the material sourced to it, and #5 does not make any claims regarding Harry Fairman's influence on Rochelle Blumenfield.
Jo-Jo Eumerus, it has been over a month since you reviewed this nomination, and over two months since Iblum has edited on Wikipedia. Since there hasn't been any response or any work done on the article, under the circumstances, you may want to consider closing the nomination; the issues seem to be of the sort that require someone familiar with the topic to work on your concerns. BlueMoonset (talk) 23:10, 12 June 2018 (UTC)Reply