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Did you know nomination
edit- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by BorgQueen (talk) 09:36, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
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Josi in 2017
- ... that defenceman Roman Josi (pictured) is the highest-scoring Swiss-born NHL player? Source: https://www.espn.com/nhl/recap/_/gameId/401272683
- ALT1: ... that defenceman Roman Josi (pictured) is the Nashville Predators single-season points leader? Source: https://www.nhl.com/predators/news/josi-sets-another-franchise-record-leads-preds-over-senators-in-ottawa/c-332751616
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Book of Common Prayer (1928, United States)
5x expanded by HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk). Self-nominated at 01:55, 18 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Roman Josi; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
- I'll review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 17:39, 18 March 2023 (UTC)
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Nice expansion! Appears to meet all the criteria, expect there's a few spots needing citations (I've marked them) and a qpq has not been provided. BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:15, 19 March 2023 (UTC)
- BeanieFan11, I have addressed all the CN tags. I will work on my QPQ tomorrow. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 05:01, 19 March 2023 (UTC)
- BeanieFan11, QPQ done. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 03:29, 1 April 2023 (UTC)
Approved. BeanieFan11 (talk) 13:28, 3 April 2023 (UTC)
GA Review
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Reviewer: 1TWO3Writer (talk · contribs) 11:49, 21 August 2023 (UTC)
Part of August 2023 backlog. Good luck.
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edit1, 12, 16, 25, 39, 48, 54, 69, 73, 87, 92, 101, 116, 123, 139, 142, 158, 168
- (48) Is 26:22 in minutes? Hours?
- Minutes. Fixed in article. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 15:58, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
Discussion
edit- Thanks for the review 1TWO3Writer! Since the Preds did not make the 2023 Stanley Cup playoffs, nothing really has happened since the season ended. However, I will add a couple sentences about how he finished (ie. pts). I will also add refs in the refs section of the awards table. I will also work on expanding/tweaking the lead.HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 15:18, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
- No problem, my main issue really though is the big paragraphs, so if you also work on that with all other improvements that'd be great! 123Writer talk 15:35, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
- @HickoryOughtShirt?4 Pinging just in case. 123Writer talk 15:38, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
- 1TWO3Writer, will do! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 15:57, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
- @HickoryOughtShirt?4 I've taken the liberty to break down the paragraphs for you. Are you happy with those changes? 123Writer talk 13:06, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
- 1TWO3Writer, yes thank you! I'm still not happy with the lead and I realized the international section also needs some work. Is there anything else you have come across? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 15:38, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
- No, not at least from a quick re-read. I'll pass the article but feel free to make any further improvements. Good job. 123Writer talk 15:46, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
- 1TWO3Writer, yes thank you! I'm still not happy with the lead and I realized the international section also needs some work. Is there anything else you have come across? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 15:38, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
- @HickoryOughtShirt?4 I've taken the liberty to break down the paragraphs for you. Are you happy with those changes? 123Writer talk 13:06, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
- 1TWO3Writer, will do! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 15:57, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
- @HickoryOughtShirt?4 Pinging just in case. 123Writer talk 15:38, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
- No problem, my main issue really though is the big paragraphs, so if you also work on that with all other improvements that'd be great! 123Writer talk 15:35, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.