Talk:Ryan Gauld/GA1

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Reviewer: Royroydeb (talk · contribs) 11:39, 16 November 2015 (UTC)

Jellyman, ping me after you have added a style of play section to this article. RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 09:26, 23 November 2015 (UTC)

• Royroydeb I've also been a frequent editor on this page and I would like to share the improvement process with Jellyman '''tAD''' (talk) 18:03, 24 November 2015 (UTC)
  • Playing style section now added thanks to The Almightey Drill. Jellyman (talk) 21:06, 24 November 2015 (UTC)

• to play for Brechin City Boys Club (later Brechin City Youths) - you mean it was later renamed as?
• United manager Peter Houston praised Gauld after a goalless draw against Ross County in September 2012. - the sudden appearance of this fact is strange. I mean why did he say so? What did he actually say - the quote
• " it was reported" - by whom?
• what was its fate? of the scouting?
• with Gauld playing a big part in the first two goals - how he took a big part?
• "he was shortlisted for the PFA Scotland Young Player of the Year award." - its followup?
• In the Dundee United section, the seasons are not clearly specified. I mean there should be sentences like "He started the 2012-13 season with" .. etc
• "put into the club's reserve team" - I think you should write B team as people generally refer the youth team as the reserve team (English league system)
• The ref 6 does not mention it is his debut
• The ref 9 does not mention it is his first start
• The last sentence of the Sporting Cp first paragraph should be put earlier.
• Any information about the 15-16 season?
• "but did not play" - source?
• compared to Lionel Messi - since it is a comparison, you should mention who had done it.

The Almightey Drill Jellyman RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 09:29, 14 December 2015 (UTC)

• All done. Great suggestions, Royroydeb '''tAD''' (talk) 20:50, 14 December 2015 (UTC)