Talk:San Marino in the Eurovision Song Contest 2020/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 18:47, 28 March 2021 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will try to start this review tonight, depending on what's going on. --K. Peake 18:47, 28 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good!
• Surround "Freaky!" with double speech marks
• The second time in 11 years part is not mentioned in the body
• Pipe final to Eurovision Song Contest 2008#Grand final
• "Due to the 2020 coronavirus pandemic in Europe," → "Due to the coronavirus pandemic in Europe during 2020," with the pipe
• "subsequently took part in" → "was subsequently an entry for" because the song itself doesn't take part
• "during Eurovision: Europe Shine a Light that" → "during the former of the three that"

 Done with some minor wording changes. Grk1011 (talk) 01:06, 29 March 2021 (UTC)

Background

• "ten times since their" → "10 times since their" per MOS:NUM
• "The nation's next four entries" → "The nation's next four entries,"
• "by Jessika feat." → "by Jessika featuring"
• "for 2018 did not" → "for 2018, did not"
• "best placing to this point" → "best placing up to 2020" per this being a while after the opening sentence
• Pipe grand final to Eurovision Song Contest 2019#Final
• "SMRTV Director General" → "San Marino RTV (SMRTV) Director General" with the wikilink
• Wikilink Eurovision Song Contest 2020

 Done Grk1011 (talk) 01:06, 29 March 2021 (UTC)

Before Eurovision

• Img looks good!

Digital Battle

• Remove Italian singer introduction to Senhit since it is clear she's the same person as Senit due to the pseudonym mention, plus remove the pipe here
• Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest 2011
• Remove pipe on "Stand By"
• "for their preferred song." → "for the song."
• [6] can remain in its first position but should be invoked second at the end of the para and not the penultimate sentence, due to backing the last two up
• "Serhat, and Valentina Monetta and Jimmy Wilson," → "Serhat as well as Monetta and Wilson,"
• Add (2019) in brackets rather than writing from 2019
• "reported that it received" → "reported that the contest received" because otherwise it sounds like you are talking about the song
• The table info should be written out in prose probably around this point, as two results is not enough to warrant a table
• "for the year's participation." → "for the nation's participation in the 2020 contest."

 Done Grk1011 (talk) 12:48, 29 March 2021 (UTC)

At Eurovision

• "on 12 and 14 May," → "on 12 and 14 May, respectively,"
• "the top ten countries from" → "the top 10 countries from" per MOS:NUM
• "The EBU announced soon after" → "The European Broadcasting Union (EBU) announced thereafter" with the wikilink
• "that were to" → "that were set to"

 Done Grk1011 (talk) 12:48, 29 March 2021 (UTC)

Alternative song contests

• "of ten singers" → "of 10 singers"
• "represented Austria at Eurovision" → "represented Austria in the Eurovision Song Contest"
• "on 14 April," → "on 14 April 2020,"

 Done Grk1011 (talk) 12:48, 29 March 2021 (UTC)

References

• Copyvio score looks great at 15.8%!!!
• Remove or replace ref 7 per WP:RSP
• Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 12
• Change 'reaky!' to 'Freaky!' on ref 13

 Done Grk1011 (talk) 12:48, 29 March 2021 (UTC)

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 08:32, 29 March 2021 (UTC)

@Kyle Peake: I believe I addressed all of your concerns! Let me know if I missed anything. Regarding a potential WP:GT, in your experience, would I be able to submit this grouping, omitting the ongoing 2021 article or would I have to wait until May/June for that to become a GA? This topic will have yearly additions, so I just wonder if there are only certain windows of time where nominations would be successful because of that. Grk1011 (talk) 12:48, 29 March 2021 (UTC)

Grk1011 ✓ Pass now and regarding a potential GT, you can nominate it before the 2021 contest like I did with Kanye West's studio albums even though Donda is pending release. However, you can use GT addition to add the 2021 contest when it becomes a GA for stopping the topic being demoted. --K. Peake 14:33, 29 March 2021 (UTC)