Talk:Sankar Montoute/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 23:56, 24 September 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 15:32, 25 September 2024 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Notes

• Add CFL to lead I guess.
• Added cats.
• "Sankar, refers to the Hindu god of destruction" There's probably a wikilink for this.
• "to New York City, to live with relatives" not sure that comma is needed
• "800m relay" Probably a link for this.
• "He was named the school's most valuable athlete in May 1979" Change "He" to Montoute for less repetition.
• "scout team" I think there's a link for this?
• I made some uncontroversial copyedits to the infobox.
• Get rid of the years for Saint Leo in the infobox and just put "basketball". Otherwise, it looks like he played football there. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 15:38, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
  • @WikiOriginal-9: Addressed all but the years point. As for that, there doesn't seem to be much precedent for how to do it; looking at Antonio Gates (the first 'college basketball → NFL player' that comes to mind) it does seem to have the years. I added a note next to the years part – does that work? Also, per the disambiguation page Sankar his name refers to Shiva; the cited articles don't mention 'Shiva' but I added it anyway – do you think that's alright? Thanks, BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:36, 25 September 2024 (UTC)

    That looks good. Passing the article. Nice work! ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 19:42, 25 September 2024 (UTC)

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