Talk:Secretariat (film)

Latest comment: 6 years ago by InternetArchiveBot in topic External links modified (February 2018)

Too much space given to two reviews

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More than half of this article contains extensive quotes from a single negative film review. Most of the rest of the article contains extensive quotes from another reviewer to balance it. Neither of these reviews are notable and both should be stubbed.Jarhed (talk) 05:57, 21 November 2010 (UTC)Reply

Reception headline

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In accordance with the Wikiproject film style guideline, I propose that we add a Reception headline, where the Critical response & Box office subsections could go, as well as adding a Home media subsection.

In the interest of simplicity, I’ve written up a proposed version reflecting these changes in my Sandbox: User:HipJorge/Secretariat. While I would normally be inclined to make these edits directly, Disney is a client of my employer, so I recognize that some may see this as a potential conflict of interest. I feel these changes will improve the article, and given the potential COI I’ve been careful to write them in a form that agrees with WP:NPOV. If anyone has any thoughts, I'd be happy to discuss them. HipJorge (talk) 19:44, 24 January 2011 (UTC)Reply

Just wanted to follow up on this...I've gone ahead and made the revisions.HipJorge (talk) 13:37, 26 January 2011 (UTC)Reply

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One other addition, the article could benefit from an including the film’s official Facebook page to the External Links section. Based on the External Links policy, I have determined that the link is not prominently linked from other official websites and the page remains active with relevant information. Please feel to weigh in on this before making the change.HipJorge (talk) 20:10, 26 January 2011 (UTC)Reply

Just to follow up on this... I went ahead and added the link, but am still open to conversation about the edit.HipJorge (talk) 19:23, 28 January 2011 (UTC)Reply

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