Talk:Shaquille O'Neal/Archive 1
Wrist
editI think it's worth noting that Shaq broke his wrist as a child and now has limited (and i mean really limited) movement of his right wrist. This explains his troubles from the line and the lack of backspin and arc on his free throws. Any experienced basketball player will be able to back me up when i say that the most important part of shooting the ball is the wrist flick upon release (which generates backspin to make the ball roll or skid into the hoop, rather than bounce out), and not being able to do that is as much (If not more)of a disadvantage as Ben Wallace's carpal tunnel problem (Which is mentioned in his wikipedia article). There are plenty of articles on the internet that will verify shaq's injury. also prehaps mention of the sheer size of shaqs hands hampering his shooting ability. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.15.149.209 (talk) 20:52, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
Publications
editShaq published a short work in Chicken Soup for the Kid's Soul called "A Good Reason for Looking Up" —Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.115.1.85 (talk) 00:32, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
References
editThe portion with the References needs editing. Some links appear in hml, others are duplicates of the links in External Links (and they should be listed the same way), etc. The Gnome 07:04, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
Successful more as a Laker?
editI don't know the specifics, but wasn't Shaq more successful with the Lakers than with his past squadrons? This info should be included. Indosauros 15:50, Jul 15, 2007 (UTC)
he got championships with the lakers that he didnt get with the magic, but that is already included in the article. stat-wise, he was about the same on both teams. User:azn king28 18:07 Oct 3, 2007
He had better numbers with the Lakers than Magic, Heat, or Suns, this is true. Basketball110 the pages I've messed up completely 23:39, 8 February 2008 (UTC)
although he had slightly better scoring numbers with the magic, it wasn't until he joined the lakers that he became an exceptional passer and it was his ability to find the open man whilst double-teamed (and sometimes triple-teamed) that made the lakers so successful. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.15.149.209 (talk) 00:01, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
Persian name
editI have heard that his name is Persian not Arabic, but I can not verify it. Perhaps someone that can speak Persian could help?
- From the NBA.com entry : "Shaquille Rashaun O’Neal : First and middle names mean “little warrior” in Islam". They do not precise which language. The Gnome 07:06, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
Two Infamous Dunks
editThe article erroneously claimed Shaq had two "backboard shattering" dunks in his rookie year. This is not true; the backboards did not shatter but the support structure of the baskets collapsed, bringing the basket and (intact) backboard crashing to the ground. I think the two incidents were slightly different in that I remember some kind of wire breaking in New Jersey while the Phoenix dunk just caused the basket to slump and fall down. I don't know the names of these pieces of equipment, and I don't see any information on the "anatomy of the hoop" here in Wikipedia. Hopefully an educated basketball fan can, in better detail, reword my edit. --Feitclub 19:57, Nov 16, 2004 (UTC)
I only remember the Phoenix dunk, it was one of the first plays in the game. The basket support collapsed after Shaq dunked the ball with both hands. The entire basket structure leaned forward slightly before tilting back, paused, then the hydraulics of the support gave. Shaq, meanwhile, stepped away from the basket with a smile on his face. I shook my head in disbelieve at the strength and sheer size of this man-child. -pauyeung
There should be a picture of Shaq with someone else--I remember a picture of him helping out with Katrina in New Orleans, standing next to a normal-sized woman. Shaq is almost unique among humans in his absurd physical proportions, and a picture would demonstrate that best.
Ahh here it is! [[1]] I've never edited Wikipedia before, how do I get this picture in? Also it is not public domain, how do I claim "fair use"?
- Here is an image at whitehouse.gov with Shaq beside US president George Bush. Wouldn't this be public domain? And it would display the size difference.
Tone
editThis article seems more like a sports editorial and not enough like an encyclopedia entry - perhaps someone who's watching this page can clean it up some? I'm not well-enough versed in Shaq's career but I might give it a go in a few days. ESkog 12:00, 19 May 2005 (UTC)
Awesome
I removed the line that read "shaquille is awesome."--Gregoryg72 06:50, 21 June 2006 (UTC)
Military Brat
editThis article leaves out the fact that Shaquille was an American military brat (child of a military family and grew up at least part of his childhood in the military world--by the way we military brats do not consider the term 'brat' to be a negative term). This was a very unique way to grow up, whether this was part of his childhood or all of it I am not sure, but this fact should be a part of this article. Source: Shaquille is listed as a "military brat" in the wikipedia article entitled "Military Brats subculture" in the section entitled "famous military brats". More should be researched about this and added to this article-- military brats live a very different life, face unusual challenges and often have unique strengths as well.
"MBA Shaquille Rashaun O'Neal"
editIs MBA used as a title, like Dr. is for somebody with a Ph.D.? I just thought it was an abbreviation for a degree. --Idont Havaname 06:00, 27 July 2005 (UTC)
- If there is a title associated with a master's degree, it would be "Master." It would not be "doctor." If there actually are people calling him "Dr. Shaq" because he has an MBA, that doesn't make a lot of sense. Funnyhat 23:11, 4 June 2006 (UTC)
Religious beliefs
editI moved the reference to Shaq's religious beliefs to Private life. A person's faith can be either public or private, of course. In this case, it seems to be something he hasn't made much of in public--and thus certainly shouldn't go in the introduction. --Tom Allen 21:02, 7 October 2005 (UTC)
- Agreed. No doubt. - Svest 21:40, 7 October 2005 (UTC) Wiki me up
Vandalism
editSomeone has been vandalizing this page. I don't know how to determine the IP address of another editor to report him/her.
As of Dec 2 2006, there is very inappropriate vandalism at the beginning of the article claiming shaq is a pornstar in japan. would appreciate it being removed.
Odd Paragraph
edit"O'Neal was named "Shaquille Rashaun" ("Little Warrior" in Arabic) by his biological father, Joseph Toney. However, he is not close to his biological father; one of his songs, "Biological Didn't Bother", explains his feelings. He once pulled a prank at military school by setting the fire alarm off and he had to wait until his step-father picked him up at the police station, and beat him."
Doesn't make sense to me. The paragraph starts off by talking about his bad relationship with his biological father, then goes on to give an example of why his relationship would be bad with his STEP father. Can somebody clarify? =) Lantoka 23:56, 9 December 2005 (UTC)
Though I do not know what it means, Shaquille and Rashaun are definitely Arabic names.
- Can you offer a source which identifies them as being Arabic? I've done a little looking and found nothing at all on "Shaquille". And everything I've found on "Rashaun" indicates something like the following from thinkbabynames.com:
- The boy's name Rashaun is pronounced ray-SHAWN. It is of American origin. Blend of Ray and Shawn, or a variant of Roshan (Persian, Farsi) "daylight."[2]
Recent edit in the Media Personality section
editAn anon added the following to the section on his media personality recently: "Many consider Shaq's biggest weakness his childlike jealousy he has for other people's success." Is there any source for this, or is this just one editor's opinion? --Idont Havaname 02:21, 5 January 2006 (UTC)
Bigfoot O'Neal
editShaq was 7 feet tall at age 13? wow Talk about early puberty.
He wears a size 22 to 23 shoe, which is by far the largest in the NBA. Most NBA guys wear 15's 16's or 17's, So he has some disproportionately gigantic feet even for his height.
Compare his shoe size even to Arvydas Sabonis who at 7'3 340 lbs wears size 18. Shaq wears 4 or 5 sizes up from even most big Centers like Sabonis.
If ever there was a Bigfoot, it is Shaq.
Name Origin
edit"Shaquille Rashaun" definitely does not mean "Little Warrior" in Arabic. Does anyone know the origin of this claim? quadratic 03:49, 21 January 2006 (UTC)
- I found a newspaper article that contains that name origin, and cites "his biogrpahy" as its source for that. At the end of the article, specific souces include Contemporary Black Biography and (apprently--it's a little unclear, actually) the book Shaq Talks Back. I'm not sure which (if either) contains the name origin, which as noted above is very much untrue.
- 24.130.126.57 10:36, 12 February 2006 (UTC)
Music Career
editSHouldn't there be something about his musical endeavours on the page?
Lakers section
editI haven't read through the entire article, but as someone who has long followed the Lakers closely, I can say that there are a number of factual inaccuracies in the Lakers section. Additionally it's highly POV and written in an un-encyclopedic fashion. Someone should really go through that and clean it up. I don't have time to do so right now, but I will at some point if no one else does. 24.130.126.57 10:19, 12 February 2006 (UTC)
- OK, upon further inspection, it seems the Laker section actually *was* much better, but was recently re-written (poorly) by 71.65.245.70. I've restored the old version. Mwelch 06:37, 13 February 2006 (UTC)
Shaquille O'Neal is 7 ft 1, 325 lbs according to recent NBA listing
editTo the best of my knolwedge he's 7-1 to 7-2 WITH SHOES. Standard NBA heights are listed with shoes on. Only some exceptions such as a few very tall players like Ming, Muresan, and Bradley have ever been listed barefoot.
Even the 7 ft 3 1/4 Arvydas Sabonis, the Lithuanian Giant, likely measures close to 7 ft 2 barefoot.
Therefore, it doesn't take a scientist to estimate that Shaq is nearly exactly 7 ft baerfoot, plus an inch or two of size 22 heals = his 7'1 to 7'2 NBA listed height.
I really don't know why the NBA lists guys by their heights in shoes, it seems a bit deceptive.
Fore example, I'm 5'11 1/4 inches barefoot, but with my 1.5 inch healed shoes, I would be rounded up to 6'1 if I were in the NBA.
The reason NBA lists players by their heights with shoes is simple: THEY PLAY WITH THEIR SHOES ON!!!!
Shaq is actually 7'1 barefoot he is one of the few players who are there listed height.
"very successful"
editBesides not being NPOV I think hip-hop and music historians alike would dispute Shaquille O'Neal being "very successful" in the rap music world. I would say he was moderately successful, had a couple of minor hits, but was not at any point regarded as a great rap artist or one who would leave a lasting impression like Rakim or Ice Cube. BronzeWarrior 07:37, 20 February 2006 (UTC)
- No disagreement from me, but I think the "very successful" vs. "moderately successful" rap career issue is probably the least of the problems with the Orlando Magic years section. That whole thing could use a re-write. Mwelch 08:15, 20 February 2006 (UTC)
love this page dont chang it
Meaning of Shaquille
editThe whole thing about his name meaning little warrior is actually from his bio on NBA.com. However, it doesnt say that it means Little Warrior in Arabic, but "Little Warrior in Islam". I don't know where exactly that interpretation came from, however I know Shaquille means handsome in Urdu and Farsi. http://www.nba.com/playerfile/shaquille_oneal/bio.html Also, there was an LA Times article that mentioned he was Muslim. The article was referring to him and Hedo Turkoglu hugging before each match during the Lakers-Kings rivalry. It says in the article that they are both Muslim so they still greet each other with respect. I will try to find a link to their (LA Times)site and post it.
Fkh82 04:17, 24 April 2006 (UTC)
- Thanks for the info. You're right about the nba.com bio. It indeed says it means "first and middle names mean 'little warrior' in Islam". Which, of course, makes it even more incorrect since Arabic is a language and Islam is not. Mwelch 08:51, 24 April 2006 (UTC)
- Well, it doesn't necessarily mean its incorrect. A name could mean something in Islam, as in having significance in Islam, but not necessarily be Arabic. The name is Persian or South Asian Islamic, but he could have been given the name "for" the Islamic significance. And since its on the NBA's website, that is probably the definition Shaquille wants it to have. I think the best way to put it is that his official bio says it means Little Warrior in Islam.
- That is a good point. As I read the sentence, I took the word "means" to indicate "translates", in the sense of one language to another, which would certainly make the statement incorrect. But I suppose one could argue that "means" could refer to having significance within in Islamic culture and/or religion, as you point out, not necessarily referring to a language-to-language phrase translation. I hadn't considered that. Mwelch 00:08, 25 April 2006 (UTC)
When someone has kids named Shareef Rashaun, Amirah Sanaa, Shaquir Rashaun; that is a clear indication that he is Muslim. Unless he enjoys using Islamic names for fun. I think this should be noted on the article, because it says that his religion is not known
Altercations
editO'Neal is also noted for his ability to form symbiotic relationships with young, talented guards. Playing alongside him, talents like Penny Hardaway, Kobe Bryant and Dwyane Wade blossomed into legitimate superstars, and later had altercations with them.
- Er, I dont think Shaq has had any fights of note with Wade. Someone should fix that.
-Deleted- innapropriate...
Npov
edit"Excellent", talking about his attributes at center seem pov to me.
Jersey change
editCan we have an explination on why he chaned his jersey from 32 to 34 in 1996 when he went to the LA Lakers?
32 was MAgic Johnsons number which was retired.
Why isn't this information in the article?
Shaq Website
editI can't figure out how to add a link to the main page, but this website has more shaq pictures than i've been able to find ANYWHERE www.shaqattaq.net and click on the link that has pictures. If someone who knows how to add it to the links, please do.
First Bit of Trivia
editThere are punctuation errors in the first bit of trivia that deals with his visit to Greece. In addition, the bit of trivia is unsourced and seems rather derogatory. It paints him as a fool who doesn't know what the acropolis is. Unless it has a valid source, I would remove it.
MCDRLx's Revert
editUser MCDRLx made some changes to 'Highlights' section and tagged it as 'rv'.
- 2-time All-Dunkadelic Team Section: and
- Second Team : 2005, 2006 entries were removed. I just wanted to say that they were on the highlights section before my revert.Can someone find information about the entries above? Bugtrio | Talk 20:38, 27 September 2006 (UTC)
- This whole "Dunkadelic" terminology thing is a neologism that's being pushed by a gentleman named Derrick Vaughn. He seems pretty persistent with it, and to his credit he seems to have put a lot of time and (original) research into it. But the bottom line is that the whole thing is his creation and not at this point in any way mainstream. His adding that mention here as well as creating new articles for "Dunkadelic" and "The Dunkadelic Era" were basically an attempt to further his campaing to push the term mainstream.
- Best of luck to him in his endeavor, but using Wikipedia as a vehicle to that end isn't at all appropriate. If and when it becomes mainstream, then wonderful. But until then, it doesn't belong here. The two articles he created have therefore already been deleted, and the deletion of the Dunkadelic mention in this article also equally appropriate. Mwelch 21:28, 27 September 2006 (UTC)
- OK.Thanks :) --Bugtrio | Talk 21:42, 27 September 2006 (UTC)
On Shaquille's Discography, it shows Superfriends Vol. 1 as being unreleased. This is true, but Shaq teamed up with burnlounge.com where the album can be downloaded. Anyone want to take a crack at how to add this?
SHACK ATACK!!!!
editmandamufugabeshakatakinaldemsoldladies.
i deleated this comment from the article. it is plainly vandalism. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Allatropic (talk • contribs) 13:39, 4 January 2007 (UTC).
Younger Brother?
editDidn't Shaq have a younger brother of comparable dimensions who was pursuing a career in basketball? I didn't see him mentioned, nor do I recall his name. --Do Not Talk About Feitclub (contributions) 22:52, 21 January 2007 (UTC)
- His brother's name is Jamal Harrison. Big guy, but not as big as O'Neal. I think Harrison is like 6' 6", or something like that. He played a couple of season for LSU several years ago, but that's about it, to my knowledge. Mwelch 23:55, 21 January 2007 (UTC)
- I actually went to high school with Jamal--he was a funny guy. He was in my drama class, of all things. Our first project in the class (with others involved) was putting together "Peter Pan in the Projects", with him playing "Puffy" Pan.
- But basketball? I saw him play one game on the high school team and his mechanics were sloppy. He often mishandled the ball, and was very mundane. SlayerRob 24:00, 56 January 2023 (UTC)
Dr. Shaq?
editIn the second paragraph of this page, it refers to Shaquille O'Neil as "Doctor" Shaq as a result of earning his MBA. However, an MBA is a Master's degree, not a doctorate. No one is, or should be refered to, as "Doctor" after earning a Master's. Should this reference be changed?
- It's a nickname. No reason to take it that seriously. If it were to be removed, the reason would not be that, but rather simply because it's one of a myriad of nicknames he's given himself at various times, often with tongue planted firmly in cheek. While certain ones like "Big Aristotle" are pretty memorable, others, like "Doctor Shaq" don't last any longer than that evening's episode of SportsCenter. So I'm not sure that "Doctor Shaq" is really any more notable than any of a dozen or so of his other nicknames-of-the-month. Mwelch 15:39, 30 January 2007 (UTC)
- What about "tha Dizzle" isn't that one of his nicknames? —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Tayquan (talk • contribs) 05:35, 19 March 2007 (UTC).
- I'm going to add "Tha Dizzle" in a week if I get no response. Tayquan 11:09, 21 March 2007 (UTC)
- What about "tha Dizzle" isn't that one of his nicknames? —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Tayquan (talk • contribs) 05:35, 19 March 2007 (UTC).
Free Throws
editThere are inconsistencies in the reporting of shaq's free throw percentage. It says he led the league for a long time in the stats section, but the text below it (Hack-a-Shaq) claims his percentage is low.
- I could be overlooking it,, but I don't see anything in the article that claims he ever led the league in free throw percentage. Mwelch 00:52, 31 January 2007 (UTC)
- I wonder if the above poster means Field Goal percentage, because the only way Shaquille O'Neal would ever lead the league in Free Throw percentage is if people with two arms were banned from playing in the league
Image
editThis image sucks. It's blurry, the pose is awkward, and it's just not interesting. Anyone have a better one, a publicity image maybe? 216.165.38.83 23:23, 15 February 2007 (UTC)
wtf?
edithow can shaq still be friends with kobe when he is in miami heat and what happens when they vs each other and form a rivalry from a friendship?
Thank you Shaq
editAs a single mother of two, I rarely have time to watch television...however, tonight was the first time that I sat with my 9 year old to watch your program "Shaqs Challenge". For my daughter who is 109lbs and considerably overweight for her age, your show was exactly that, a challenge. For me on the other hand, a mother who works all day and worries with every passing moment who will say what to my child and what will she be eating, it was the most effective display of primetime television that I have seen in quite some time. You have inspired my daughter to be better, to push herself, to want to maintain a healthy lifestyle and to be her ultimate best! For that I thank you. As a mother of two who has never dealt with weight issues, this has become my challenge. Your show, and your willingness to improve the overall quality of healty in our youth has proven to be monumental. Having said that, any assistance that I may be able to provide you with your challenge, please count me in.
Thank you for inspiring my child to want to be better, be healthier, and strive for the utmost health. You are a true inspiration and I am proud that my child idolizes you as her all time favorite Basketball All Star! You are a hero in my eyes.
Thank you,
Mary Del Pino mkdelpino@hotmail.com
Pre-professional basketball experience
editI'm new to Wikipedia, so I don't know who to report this to. The pre-professional basketball experience information is obviously wrong, but I don't know who to or how to notify somebody. That's all.
Drmarkan 17:08, 24 August 2007 (UTC)drmarkanDrmarkan 17:08, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
12 ft 6 in??
editUpon seeing the 12-foot, 6-inch, 1224-pound O'Neal, the visiting Brown reportedly mistook the then-13-year old boy for a soldier. This is under 'Pre-professional basketball experience'. Not sure what is supposed to be said so I'm going to leave it to someone else.
Doctorate
editIf he completes a doctorate in criminology, will he have to turn himself in for making Kazaam, or is he simply trying to understand what drove him to it? Titanium Dragon (talk) 07:27, 15 January 2008 (UTC)
- Very funny, but this is not what the talk page is for. Leebo T/C 21:26, 16 January 2008 (UTC)
Traded
editTraded to Phoenix today fyi 64.148.241.133 (talk) 08:14, 6 February 2008 (UTC).
- Not yet. No official reports yet, and we probably won't see any until tomorrow. I'm fairly certain that's why the page is semi-protected. When it happens, it needs to be properly sourced and added. Snowfire51 (talk) 08:20, 6 February 2008 (UTC)
Now it's official. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.232.168.30 (talk) 23:23, 6 February 2008 (UTC)
Why?
editAre his albums and movies listed? They are absolutely dreadful! haha -FancyMustard (talk) 19:02, 6 February 2008 (UTC)
Weight
editHow heavy is Shaq? This article lists him at 375lbs AND 330lbs in different places, while NBA.com lists him at 325. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 137.99.139.105 (talk) 04:16, 7 February 2008 (UTC)
I reckon you should go by the NBA.com weight. --91.84.113.46 (talk) 06:04, 9 February 2008 (UTC)
I just saw Shaq at the 2009 NBA All Star game and there is ZERO chance he is 325lbs. He is significantly WIDER and BIGGER than any other player on the court and even Yao Ming weighs in at 310. Shaq has to be much closer to 400lbs. I might believe 375, but 325 is off by at least 50lbs. I guess he prefers to under report his weight, but 325 is no where even close to believable. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 134.134.139.70 (talk) 04:52, 19 February 2009 (UTC)
Fair use rationale for Image:Shaq Fuboxart.JPG
editImage:Shaq Fuboxart.JPG is being used on this article. I notice the image page specifies that the image is being used under fair use but there is no explanation or rationale as to why its use in this Wikipedia article constitutes fair use. In addition to the boilerplate fair use template, you must also write out on the image description page a specific explanation or rationale for why using this image in each article is consistent with fair use.
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My Changes (User:Udonknome)
editI've made lots of changes to this article, and right now i feel guilty for not discussing any of them.
- I cleaned up the intro as it was too messy
- expanded the Suns' section
- moved content from the introduction intro other sections
- put "Education" and "police officer.." into one section (please someone come up with a better name than "Off court"; it really sucks!)
- expanded the music career with a small paragraph (there are lots of sources for this!) and moved the "non-professional" parts of the article down (personal life, off court, media etc.) the page.
- I also added an adapted template from Template:Notability for the section "Television and video game appearances" (are we stalking him?) and hope this can be discussed. By the way, is there a Template:Notability for only single sections though? I'm almost certain there is one...
- Also, I tried working out the pronunciation of his full name from Help:Pronunciation but I could easily be wrong.
Nonetheless, any comments, critisism and ideas are welcome. For an overall picture for the mess I did, see here. Thanks Do U(knome)? yes...|or no · 04:11, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
- Oh, I also fixed the headings for the biography, which was the reason why I started this. Do U(knome)? yes...|or no · 04:18, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
Alleged income from teams by O'Neal
editi found this on the article, with no sources. I moved this here in order to discuss whether this content is appropriate for the article:
Season Team Salary
1992-93 Orlando Magic NBA $3,000,000
1993-94 Orlando Magic NBA $3,900,000
1994-95 Orlando Magic NBA $4,800,000
1995-96 Orlando Magic NBA $5,700,000
1996-97 Los Angeles Lakers NBA $10,714,000
1997-98 Los Angeles Lakers NBA $12,857,143
1998-99 Los Angeles Lakers NBA $15,000,000
1999-00 Los Angeles Lakers NBA $17,142,858
2000-01 Los Angeles Lakers NBA $19,285,715
2001-02 Los Angeles Lakers NBA $21,428,572
2002-03 Los Angeles Lakers NBA $23,571,429
2003-04 Los Angeles Lakers NBA $26,517,858
2004-05 Miami Heat NBA $27,696,430
2005-06 Miami Heat NBA $20,000,000
2006-07 Miami Heat NBA $20,000,000
2007-08 Miami/Phoenix NBA $20,000,000
Career (may be incomplete) $251,614,005
comments?
International Career
editThis part should also be mencioned in the article. He won the World Championship title in 1994 and the Olympic Champion title in 1996 for the USA "Dream Team". It also should be mencioned why he didn't was selected for the American team that entered the Olympic Tournament in 2000, 2004 and 2008.213.13.246.177 (talk) 17:11, 19 August 2008 (UTC)
TV shows
editYou forgot to mention that Shaq was once featured in MTV's Cribs in the miscellaneous pop culture section.
{{editsemiprotected}}
Under the Television/video games section, the last bullet is redundant, due to the fact that his appearances on The Parkers were previously mentioned a few lines above, along with his appearances on My Wife and Kids. Please change the last line, regarding his appearance on The Parkers, to a blank, deleted line. --71.195.76.89 (talk) 07:37, 4 December 2008 (UTC)
- Can you show me exactly how it is redundant? I can't find the line. Leujohn (talk) 13:07, 4 December 2008 (UTC)
- Done It was redundant to the line a little over halfway down that crazy list, O'Neal appeared in 2 episodes of both My Wife and Kids and the The Parkers. I've removed it as requested. Thanks. ~ mazca t|c 19:37, 4 December 2008 (UTC)
Weight
editThe article says that he weights 2,6 kilograms. Why? 85.30.153.81 (talk) 15:45, 6 January 2009 (UTC)
- Somebody deliberately made an inaccurate edit to the article. It's since been reverted. -- Luke4545 (talk) 15:54, 6 January 2009 (UTC)
Kazaam
editWhy is it that Kazaam is not listed here under his acting career? I know the movie was rubbish, but that does not mean it shouldn't be listed here. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.118.95.73 (talk) 01:55, 9 February 2009 (UTC)
Seconded. This should be listed. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.177.140.247 (talk) 19:18, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
Career Transactions
editShaq was never traded by the Lakers to the Heat for Shawn Marion. He was traded by the Heat to the Suns. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.230.177.49 (talk) 04:04, 16 February 2009 (UTC)
"most quotable athletes of all time"
editWhere's the citation for this? Looks dubious to me. Macgroover (talk) 08:57, 25 February 2009 (UTC)
After a quick scan through the article, I didn't come across anything mentioning Shaq's tweeting, and since I don't see it discussed on the talk page, I figured I'd broach the subject. Shaq is one of the more noteworthy users of Twitter (no less a paper than the New York Times ran a piece dedicated solely to his tweeting); is this worth a mention in the article? faithless (speak) 07:09, 28 February 2009 (UTC)
Shaq has tweeted about his Ph.D. coursework, reportedly in the field of "human resource development" [3]. 24.251.184.182 (talk) 07:50, 1 March 2009 (UTC)
- I would add this to the education section, but I can't as I'm not autoconfirmed Aradisc (talk) 03:45, 23 March 2009 (UTC)
Copyright violation
editI don't know how long this has been the case for, but on looking up references and on finding some peacock wording, I inadvertently found out that a significant part of this article may have been lifted verbatim from the player's biography at the lakers' website. This is clearly unacceptable, and I am close to blanking out the article per WP:COPYVIO. However, there have been some transformations including my own, so before I do any blanking, maybe some others have comments. Ohconfucius (talk) 04:39, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
- On examining the text, I found that there had not been significant transformation of the relevant sections of it, so it has now been completely excised. A fresh start is now in order. Ohconfucius (talk) 05:05, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
- I have also found that the section on Miami Heat was lifted wholescale, from Barry's Tickets. The offending text has also now been excised. Ohconfucius (talk) 05:17, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
- I performed this comparison between these articles, and the version before I started copyediting. It seems that the blocks of text relating to the Lakers and Miami Heat were inserted on 12 February 2006 in a series of 3 edits by IP User 71.65.245.70. When comparing the version introduced by the IP user to the text on the Barry's Ticket or Lakers' website, we have this diff. As a result of these comparisons, I am now unsure as to the initial conclusion of copyright violation that I drew. Ohconfucius (talk) 15:59, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
- It would be so nice if this were easy work. :) --Moonriddengirl (talk) 18:19, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
Superman Feud
editDon't you guys think there should be a section about Shaq's feud with Dwight Howard?
I haven't looked at this situation in detail, but just as a quick comment, lakersplayers.org is not the Lakers' official site. This is. I'm pretty sure that at least some of the material at lakersplayers.org was taken from Wikipedia. For example, I started our article on Tom Abernethy as an IP editor. That version of the article is very similar to the one at lakersplayers.org. Also note in the players list at lakersplayers.org that the names follow Wikipedia disambiguation conventions - eg, "James Edwards (basketball)". Zagalejo^^^ 17:43, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
- Just to add, it appears that Barry's Tickets is also copying from Wikipedia. I started Devin Green in 2005 as an IP at Loyola University. The version at Barry's Tickets is almost exactly the same as mine, and is exactly the same as this version by Jerzy. (I don't know if you could prove that was me editing at the time, but if you look at the editing patterns, you should be able to conclude that it was.) Zagalejo^^^ 18:02, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
- Actually, both sites' articles on Devin Green are the same: [4], [5]. Zagalejo^^^ 18:55, 3 June 2009 (UTC)
- That was the case with the Shaq article, only that there was more in the Barry's Tickets site than the lakers players site. Seeing the evolution of the WP article, I would now be inclined to say it was probably copied from WP without attribution. I just need to find the exact version which was copied. Once we have that, we can restore the content unequivocally, and issue a notice to those two sites asking them to comply with the terms of GFDL. Ohconfucius (talk) 02:24, 4 June 2009 (UTC)
- Actually, both sites' articles on Devin Green are the same: [4], [5]. Zagalejo^^^ 18:55, 3 June 2009 (UTC)
- Just to add, it appears that Barry's Tickets is also copying from Wikipedia. I started Devin Green in 2005 as an IP at Loyola University. The version at Barry's Tickets is almost exactly the same as mine, and is exactly the same as this version by Jerzy. (I don't know if you could prove that was me editing at the time, but if you look at the editing patterns, you should be able to conclude that it was.) Zagalejo^^^ 18:02, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
- Here's hoping this one will be easy. The first site is archived to August 2007. If the text appeared here after that, then we've got no confusion. I'm off to check. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 17:51, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
- Not easy. :/ It was there before that, but that doesn't necessarily eliminate copyvio, since wayback is not infallible. I'll look for context clues. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 17:53, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
<-Context clues are with us. Our article before the removal of this material said:
O'Neal was drafted as the 1st overall pick in the 1992 NBA Draft by the Orlando Magic (he would later be teammates on the Miami Heat with the second and third picks of that same draft: Alonzo Mourning and Christian Laettner). During that summer, prior to moving to Orlando, he spent a significant amount of time in Los Angeles under the tutelage of Hall of Famer Magic Johnson.
The suspected source at earliest archive said:
O'Neal was drafted first overall in the 1992 NBA Draft by the Orlando Magic. During that summer, prior to moving to Orlando, he spent a significant amount of time in Los Angeles under the tutelage of Hall of Famer Magic Johnson.
I picked the word "drafted" to trace back. The word entered here, in December 2005:
O'Neal was drafted 1st. overall in the 1992 NBA Draft by the Orlando Magic. Here he spent his first 4 years of his career before leaving the Magic and signing as a free agent with the Los Angeles Lakers on July 18, 1996.
Next significant word: "tutelage." That section had been revised by other contributors before it appeared, here, in 7 March 2006:
O'Neal was drafted first overall in the 1992 NBA Draft by the Orlando Magic. During that summer, prior to moving to Orlando, he spent a significant amount of time in Los Angeles under the tutelage of Hall of Famer Magic Johnson.
In addition to revising that sentence closer to the external site, it also altered "1st" to "first," in line with that external site.
The next passage in the external source begins, "O'Neal had an exceptional rookie season, as he helped the Magic win 20 more games than the previous season, with the team ultimately missing the playoffs by only one game."
That was added in February 2006 along with a bunch of other highly questionable material. (Sounds like it was copied from a kid's book: "O'Neal was very proud when they put the gold medal around his neck."?)
I'm not so sure about the source of the material in that last edit, but that these three distinctive chunks were added over a span of several months by evidently different contributors long before the earliest archive of this particular source is reassuring with respect to this source, anyway. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 18:17, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
Getting close to the "mirrored" version
editI have not yet found the exact same version, but it seems that the copy on lakersplayer and Barry's Ticket may have been taken from a version of the wikipedia article around 3 September, which is a couple of sentences apart. I cannot seem to get any closer - I suppose it is possible that the two phrases were not from WP, or from an intermediate version which I cannot identify. I think this is probably conclusive enough proof that WP was the source, so the removed text can be restored. OTOH, is this conclusive enough for us to go and ask for attribution from the copiers? and if so, how do we go about it? Ohconfucius (talk) 04:26, 4 June 2009 (UTC)
- Seems there have been problems known to us since 2006. Ohconfucius (talk) 04:34, 4 June 2009 (UTC)
- Yeah, it's probably a lost cause, unfortunately.Barry's Tickets is listed there, too.
- I'm going to restore the sections, unless you have any objections. I'll start adding sources when I get a chance. Zagalejo^^^ 05:02, 4 June 2009 (UTC)
Funny
editThe article scored 12 thousand hits on a day when a huge chunk of material was blanked on suspicion of Copyvio. Ohconfucius (talk) 04:31, 5 June 2009 (UTC)
Miami Heat Championship... why isn't it here??
editUnder the section detailing Shaq's years with the Miami Heat, no mention is made to the 2005-06 season in which the team won the championship. In fact, the same section only seems to detail his injuries and shortcomings. Why is this important season left out? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.9.150.124 (talk) 18:29, 3 June 2009 (UTC)
- Large chunks of the article were recently removed because of suspicions of copyright violation. I'm pretty sure the text at Lakersplayers.org and Barry Ticket's was here first. Zagalejo^^^ 18:37, 3 June 2009 (UTC)
- I've since restored the material. Zagalejo^^^ 05:10, 4 June 2009 (UTC)
Coach Rodman?
editTail end of the "Los Angeles Lakers" section...
"Former Chicago Bulls forward Dennis Rodman was signed as the new coach, but only lasted 23 games. As a result, the Lakers were swept by the San Antonio Spurs in the second round of the Western Conference playoffs. The Spurs would go on to win their first league title that year."
I could be wrong, but I don't recall Rodman being a coach. He is not listed on WP's List of Laker Coaches, nor is being a coach mentioned in his article. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Catofgrey (talk • contribs) 21:01, 4 June 2009 (UTC)
- No, Rodman never coached anyone in the NBA. He was signed as a player. In any case, it seems like the sentence has been removed. Zagalejo^^^ 22:36, 4 June 2009 (UTC)
Weird Line
edit"Whether or not this will raise speculation of O'Neal's life after playing basketball remains to be seen." I think this should be "Whether this is an indication of O'Neal's plans for after his career playing basketball remains to be seen." The original line doesn't make sense. We're still waiting to see if people are speculating?
Also, just to be really picky, "whether or not" is redundant and you can just say "whether," the "or not" is implied. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.66.229.30 (talk) 11:55, 5 June 2009 (UTC)
- I decided to remove that paragraph altogether. It's now 2009, and O'Neal is still playing, so the whole thing is silly to mention. Zagalejo^^^ 19:56, 5 June 2009 (UTC)
Kobe feud
editHow come there are no links to the wikipedia article about the infamous shaq-kobe feud? What about shaq's rap dissing kobe? 75.58.47.245 (talk) 06:09, 15 June 2009 (UTC)
- There is a link to Shaq-Kobe feud in the "Media personality" section. Zagalejo^^^ 07:54, 15 June 2009 (UTC)
you right... But I think the link to the feud should also be incorporated in the player profile section where they talk about his soured relationhip with Kobe. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.58.47.245 (talk) 15:01, 15 June 2009 (UTC)
Michael Jordan's Chicago Bulls?
edit"In his third season, O'Neal led the NBA in scoring and was voted into his third straight All-Star Game; Orlando won 57 games and won the Atlantic Division. After defeating Michael Jordan's Chicago Bulls and....."
Michael Jordan was in his first retirement during that time. How can he lead the Bulls when he's playing baseball? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Miregoji (talk • contribs) 16:52, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
- O'Neal's third season was 94-95. Jordan returned to the Bulls in the middle of that season. Zagalejo^^^ 06:27, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
Assessment comment
editThe comment(s) below were originally left at Talk:Shaquille O'Neal/Comments, and are posted here for posterity. Following several discussions in past years, these subpages are now deprecated. The comments may be irrelevant or outdated; if so, please feel free to remove this section.
Needs inline citations per WP:Cite, see Michael Jordan and Hakeem Olajuwon. Quadzilla99 07:38, 16 January 2007 (UTC) |
Last edited at 19:46, 20 January 2007 (UTC). Substituted at 22:03, 3 May 2016 (UTC)