Talk:She's All I Ever Had

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review
Good articleShe's All I Ever Had has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
January 16, 2022Good article nomineeListed

debut chart

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  • Debut Latin Songs number #20

Orphaned references in She's All I Ever Had

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I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of She's All I Ever Had's orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

Reference named "Rolling Stone 20":

  • From Ricky Martin (1999 album): Exposito, Suzy (May 27, 2019). "Flashback: Ricky Martin Drives American Talk Show Hosts 'Loca' in 1999". Rolling Stone. Archived from the original on May 27, 2019. Retrieved May 23, 2021.
  • From María (Ricky Martin song): Exposito, Suzy (September 17, 2020). "Ricky Martin Talks New Music, What It Means to Be a Gay Latino Icon". Rolling Stone. Archived from the original on August 22, 2021. Retrieved August 22, 2021.

I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT 21:13, 17 October 2021 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:She's All I Ever Had/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 10:01, 13 January 2022 (UTC)Reply


This is the last remaining songs GAN from October, therefore I shall wipe it out! --K. Peake 10:01, 13 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

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Infobox and lead

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  • Replace hlist with bullet points per Template:Infobox song
  • Why are the producers ordered differently in the infobox from elsewhere?
  • In the prose, add after the main producers, "with co-production from Rosa."
  • Wikilink love song
  • "while he continues to live" → "while continuing to live"
  • "who complimented its production" → "who complimented the production"
  • "reached the summit of" → "reached the summit of both"
  • "The track was" → "The version was"
  • Wikilink music video and add some info to the lead about the synopsis

Background and release

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  • Remove the comma before Vuelve
  • It does not appear that any of the sources here actually back up critics in general praising the album
  • This is one review so is not a suitable source for consensus and I don't think adding multiple ones is suitable for backing up critics praising it; use a source that states the reviews were positive or remove this part. --K. Peake 11:09, 15 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
  • "It topped the charts" → "The song topped the charts"
  • "has been working" → "had started working"
  • "that his album," → "that the album,"
  • "has been set for" → "had been set for"
  • Pipe best-selling singles of all time to List of best-selling singles
  • Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine)
  • "mentioning that the album was" → "mentioning that it was"
  • "that one of the album's tracks" → "that one of the tracks" because we already know this is about the album
  • "Martin dedicated the track" specify if this is the former or latter
  • "on August 30, 1999, September 15, 1999, and" → "on August 30, September 15, and" since 1999 being after the last date makes it clear all of them are from the year
  • "The maxi singles contain different" → "The singles contain different"

Music and lyrics

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  • Audio sample looks good!
  • Like I said about the lead, mention the co-production after the lead producers
  • "According to the both versions'" → "According to both versions'"
  • Remove pipe on beats per minute
  • Wikilink love song
  • Are you sure the punctuation shouldn't be inside quotes for the lyrics?

Critical reception

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  • "and heartfelt" and "boasting" → "and heartfelt", and "boasting"
  • "of Robi Rosa’s" → "of Robi Rosa's" (wrong apostrophe format)
  • "in the feels".[37]" → "in the feels",[37] while" merging with the following sentence

Accolades

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  • ""Bella" was also nominated for" → "It was also nominated for"
  • 2000 Latin Billboard Music Awards → 2000 Latin Billboard Music Awards
  • "in Pop/Ballad category" → "in the Pop/Ballad category"
  • Pipe BMI Latin Awards to BMI Film & TV Awards

Commercial performance

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  • "it became Martin's second top five" → "the song became Martin's second top-five"
  • "and Adult Contemporary, respectively." → "and Adult Contemporary charts, respectively."
  • "On the latter, it spent 38 weeks on the chart, becoming Martin's first top 10" → "It spent 38 weeks on the latter chart, becoming Martin's first top-10"
  • Mention the date it was certified by the RIAA and that this is for those copies in the US
  • Remove Spanish-language intro to "Bella" since this is already known
  • "It also peaked" → "The track also peaked"
  • Per Geographical order, Canada should be the first of the para and use the title at the start of this sentence instead
  • "top five hit in the country," → "top-five hit in Canada,"
  • After the Australia sentence, add one about how the song reached the top 10 in New Zealand, peaking at number eight
  • Croatia should be after the Oceania territories per Geographical order, then follow it with the other top 10 and 20 ones that are in Europe
  • [72] is not displaying any position

Music videos

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  • Img looks good!
  • Remove "for "She's All I Ever Had"" after the accompanying music video part, as the term accompanying makes it clear this is for the song

Live performances and appearances in media

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  • The term "impressive" is not encyclopedic to describe women, so remove the word
  • "the sixth performance" → "the sixth best performance"
  • "Daneesha Davis of" → "Daneesha Davis of the"
  • "of the former as" → "of the song as" because it was sentences ago that both were mentioned
  • "in 2006 where Martin" → "in 2006, where Martin"
  • "as snake on" → "as the snake on"

Formats and track listings

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  • Good

Credits and personnel

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  • Good

Charts

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Weekly charts

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Year-end charts

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  • Good

Certifications and sales

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  • Retitle to Certifications per no specific sales figures being mentioned by a source

Release history

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  • Good

See also

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  • Good

References

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  • Copyvio score looks nice at 30.6%!!!
  • Add the language parameter to ref 5
  • WP:OVERLINK of Apple Music on ref 21
  • Add the language parameter to ref 22
  • Wikilink The Indianapolis Star on ref 25
  • Pipe The Gazette to Montreal Gazette on ref 34
  • WP:OVERLINK of Tidal (service) on ref 36
  • Remove wikilink on The Indianapolis Star for ref 38
  • Pipe BMI Awards to BMI Film & TV Awards on ref 50
  • Pipe Nielsen Business Media, Inc to Nielsen Holdings on ref 61
  • Pipe Croatian Radiotelevision to Hrvatska radiotelevizija on ref 66
  • Ref 72 needs to be working for the Iceland position, so either add an archive or different source and italicise Dagblaðið Vísir then pipe to DV (newspaper)
  • Cite Univision as publisher on ref 85
  • MOS:QWQ issues with ref 89 and wikilink MTV News
  • Add Tidal as publisher for ref 93
  • WP:OVERLINK of El Diario La Prensa on ref 97
  • Wikilink Music & Media on ref 114
  • Cite last name then first on ref 116
  • Add an archive, replace or remove ref 129 since the URL automatically closes when I open it in a tab

Final comments and verdict

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@Kyle Peake: Thank you for another wonderful review. As always it was an honor for me. I fixed all the issues, I hope I haven't missed anything. If I had, please tell me to fix it. Thank you so much. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 16:10, 15 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
 Pass time, you have done a solid job once again! --K. Peake 07:37, 16 January 2022 (UTC)Reply