Talk:She's All I Ever Had/GA1

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 10:01, 13 January 2022 (UTC)Reply


This is the last remaining songs GAN from October, therefore I shall wipe it out! --K. Peake 10:01, 13 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked   are unassessed

Infobox and lead

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  • Replace hlist with bullet points per Template:Infobox song
  • Why are the producers ordered differently in the infobox from elsewhere?
  • In the prose, add after the main producers, "with co-production from Rosa."
  • Wikilink love song
  • "while he continues to live" → "while continuing to live"
  • "who complimented its production" → "who complimented the production"
  • "reached the summit of" → "reached the summit of both"
  • "The track was" → "The version was"
  • Wikilink music video and add some info to the lead about the synopsis

Background and release

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  • Remove the comma before Vuelve
  • It does not appear that any of the sources here actually back up critics in general praising the album
  • This is one review so is not a suitable source for consensus and I don't think adding multiple ones is suitable for backing up critics praising it; use a source that states the reviews were positive or remove this part. --K. Peake 11:09, 15 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
  • "It topped the charts" → "The song topped the charts"
  • "has been working" → "had started working"
  • "that his album," → "that the album,"
  • "has been set for" → "had been set for"
  • Pipe best-selling singles of all time to List of best-selling singles
  • Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine)
  • "mentioning that the album was" → "mentioning that it was"
  • "that one of the album's tracks" → "that one of the tracks" because we already know this is about the album
  • "Martin dedicated the track" specify if this is the former or latter
  • "on August 30, 1999, September 15, 1999, and" → "on August 30, September 15, and" since 1999 being after the last date makes it clear all of them are from the year
  • "The maxi singles contain different" → "The singles contain different"

Music and lyrics

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  • Audio sample looks good!
  • Like I said about the lead, mention the co-production after the lead producers
  • "According to the both versions'" → "According to both versions'"
  • Remove pipe on beats per minute
  • Wikilink love song
  • Are you sure the punctuation shouldn't be inside quotes for the lyrics?

Critical reception

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  • "and heartfelt" and "boasting" → "and heartfelt", and "boasting"
  • "of Robi Rosa’s" → "of Robi Rosa's" (wrong apostrophe format)
  • "in the feels".[37]" → "in the feels",[37] while" merging with the following sentence

Accolades

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  • ""Bella" was also nominated for" → "It was also nominated for"
  • 2000 Latin Billboard Music Awards → 2000 Latin Billboard Music Awards
  • "in Pop/Ballad category" → "in the Pop/Ballad category"
  • Pipe BMI Latin Awards to BMI Film & TV Awards

Commercial performance

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  • "it became Martin's second top five" → "the song became Martin's second top-five"
  • "and Adult Contemporary, respectively." → "and Adult Contemporary charts, respectively."
  • "On the latter, it spent 38 weeks on the chart, becoming Martin's first top 10" → "It spent 38 weeks on the latter chart, becoming Martin's first top-10"
  • Mention the date it was certified by the RIAA and that this is for those copies in the US
  • Remove Spanish-language intro to "Bella" since this is already known
  • "It also peaked" → "The track also peaked"
  • Per Geographical order, Canada should be the first of the para and use the title at the start of this sentence instead
  • "top five hit in the country," → "top-five hit in Canada,"
  • After the Australia sentence, add one about how the song reached the top 10 in New Zealand, peaking at number eight
  • Croatia should be after the Oceania territories per Geographical order, then follow it with the other top 10 and 20 ones that are in Europe
  • [72] is not displaying any position

Music videos

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  • Img looks good!
  • Remove "for "She's All I Ever Had"" after the accompanying music video part, as the term accompanying makes it clear this is for the song

Live performances and appearances in media

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  • The term "impressive" is not encyclopedic to describe women, so remove the word
  • "the sixth performance" → "the sixth best performance"
  • "Daneesha Davis of" → "Daneesha Davis of the"
  • "of the former as" → "of the song as" because it was sentences ago that both were mentioned
  • "in 2006 where Martin" → "in 2006, where Martin"
  • "as snake on" → "as the snake on"

Formats and track listings

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  • Good

Credits and personnel

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  • Good

Charts

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Weekly charts

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Year-end charts

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  • Good

Certifications and sales

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  • Retitle to Certifications per no specific sales figures being mentioned by a source

Release history

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  • Good

See also

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  • Good

References

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  • Copyvio score looks nice at 30.6%!!!
  • Add the language parameter to ref 5
  • WP:OVERLINK of Apple Music on ref 21
  • Add the language parameter to ref 22
  • Wikilink The Indianapolis Star on ref 25
  • Pipe The Gazette to Montreal Gazette on ref 34
  • WP:OVERLINK of Tidal (service) on ref 36
  • Remove wikilink on The Indianapolis Star for ref 38
  • Pipe BMI Awards to BMI Film & TV Awards on ref 50
  • Pipe Nielsen Business Media, Inc to Nielsen Holdings on ref 61
  • Pipe Croatian Radiotelevision to Hrvatska radiotelevizija on ref 66
  • Ref 72 needs to be working for the Iceland position, so either add an archive or different source and italicise Dagblaðið Vísir then pipe to DV (newspaper)
  • Cite Univision as publisher on ref 85
  • MOS:QWQ issues with ref 89 and wikilink MTV News
  • Add Tidal as publisher for ref 93
  • WP:OVERLINK of El Diario La Prensa on ref 97
  • Wikilink Music & Media on ref 114
  • Cite last name then first on ref 116
  • Add an archive, replace or remove ref 129 since the URL automatically closes when I open it in a tab

Final comments and verdict

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@Kyle Peake: Thank you for another wonderful review. As always it was an honor for me. I fixed all the issues, I hope I haven't missed anything. If I had, please tell me to fix it. Thank you so much. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 16:10, 15 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
 Pass time, you have done a solid job once again! --K. Peake 07:37, 16 January 2022 (UTC)Reply