Reason for Confusing and Inappriate Tone Tags

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Essentially, I believe the text is too dense and technical, written more for someone in the film industry than for the average Wikipedia user. It could probably use some "dumbing down" and explanations. Tone wise, it's very informal and almost strays into first person. I'd take a crack at it, but I myself don't have a clear idea of what a "short end" is. Wyatt Riot 11:26, 29 September 2006 (UTC)Reply