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This page needs to be redone to include the novel and movie versions of the story. Also it would be nice if an English major proof reads the page because there are a lot grammer mistakes and sentences that aren't properly written. I've proofed what I can, but I am no English major.

Images

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I can supply images of Shuya from all 3 versions (manga, BR film and BRII film). --Henrickson 00:07, 11 May 2006 (UTC)Reply

There should be a picture of the Manga version of Shuya.

It's coming, please be patient. I have 3000 pages of manga to go through, shouldn't be hard to find a decent one. :) I'll also take pics of other characters while I'm at it. --Henrickson 05:09, 23 July 2006 (UTC)Reply

It looks like there are a lot of run-on sentences, but I lost track of them when I went to make my account. Anyone willing to read through and find them? They didn't look too hard to fix, just get rid of a few commas and "and"s.--Ceolwulf 05:49, 27 August 2006 (UTC)Reply

Too Much Plot

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This article has too much plot in it, it should be integrated into the parent articles, instead of used in this article. This article should focus on the character and *who* he is. Not *what* he did.--Hitsuji Kinno 22:24, 18 September 2007 (UTC)Reply

Fair use rationale for Image:BR2 Shiori vs Shuya.jpg

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Image:BR2 Shiori vs Shuya.jpg is being used on this article. I notice the image page specifies that the image is being used under fair use but there is no explanation or rationale as to why its use in this Wikipedia article constitutes fair use. In addition to the boilerplate fair use template, you must also write out on the image description page a specific explanation or rationale for why using this image in each article is consistent with fair use.

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BetacommandBot (talk) 04:20, 12 February 2008 (UTC)Reply