Talk:Sierra Leone at the 2012 Summer Olympics

Latest comment: 9 years ago by 23W in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: 23W (talk · contribs) 07:19, 27 January 2015 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
  • The first sentence should be disemboldened (MOS:BOLDTITLE).
  • "No Sierra Leonean athlete has ever won a medal at the Olympics": would precede with an {{as of}} template.
  • "They both qualified after meeting the 'A' and 'B' qualifying standards": replace the single quote marks (') with doubles (").
  • "and was 0.18 metres behind a qualification spot and therefore, Sesay did not advance to the final": would rephrase as "and was 0.18 metres behind a qualification spot, therefore not advancing to the final" to be less redundant.

Nicely done. On hold for 14 days. 23W 04:22, 29 January 2015 (UTC)Reply

@23W: All   Done. Thanks for the review! good888 (talk) 08:42, 29 January 2015 (UTC)Reply
  You're welcome. Nice catch with the capitalization of summer in "Summer Olympics". Passing. 23W 02:17, 30 January 2015 (UTC)Reply