Talk:Sierra Leone at the 2012 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: 23W (talk · contribs) 07:19, 27 January 2015 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• The first sentence should be disemboldened (MOS:BOLDTITLE).
• "No Sierra Leonean athlete has ever won a medal at the Olympics": would precede with an {{as of}} template.
• "They both qualified after meeting the 'A' and 'B' qualifying standards": replace the single quote marks (') with doubles (").
• "and was 0.18 metres behind a qualification spot and therefore, Sesay did not advance to the final": would rephrase as "and was 0.18 metres behind a qualification spot, therefore not advancing to the final" to be less redundant.

Nicely done. On hold for 14 days. 23W 04:22, 29 January 2015 (UTC)

@23W: All  Done. Thanks for the review! good888 (talk) 08:42, 29 January 2015 (UTC)

You're welcome. Nice catch with the capitalization of summer in "Summer Olympics". Passing. 23W 02:17, 30 January 2015 (UTC)