Talk:Silver-throated tanager/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by FunkMonk in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: FunkMonk (talk · contribs) 16:48, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
- Might as well have a look at this bird too. FunkMonk (talk) 16:48, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
- Any cladogram?
- Added.
- Have you looked at Google Scholar for additional sources? Looks a bit skimpy now.
- Checked Scholar, found a bit on parasites, but nothing else new.
- "The silver-throated tanager was first described as Calliste icterocephala by Charles Lucien Bonaparte in 1851" But when was it moved to its current genus and by who?
- Added some info, but couldn't find a ref specifying who synonymized it and when (although I'm thinking it's Gray for Calliste being lumped into Calospiza).
- Link Tangara at first mention.
- Done.
- Link species group.
- Done.
- "This placement is supported by mitochondrial DNA evidence.[6]" Conducted by who and when?
- Added.
- Add a caption for the map.
- Done.
- The two profile photos are very similar, how about using one that shows the bird from a different angle too? Front, back, flying, etc. For example:[1][2]
- Changed.
- Colour of the beak, eyes and feet?
- Added.
- "April–September, during when" During which?
- I think when is correct, though I'm not sure.
- "Females are the only one" Ones?
- Fixed.
- "species of passerine bird in the tanager family Thraupidae." Should also be stated in the article body.
- Done.
- "along with tall secondary forests, along with disturbed habitat" The double "along with" is repetitive.
- Reworded.
- Anything on courtship behaviour?
- Nope.
- That should be all for now, AryKun. FunkMonk (talk) 01:42, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
- FunkMonk, I think I've addressed all your concerns. AryKun (talk) 12:15, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
- Alright, changes look good, I wish there was more info, but you can't add stuff that doesn't exist. So I'll promote it now. FunkMonk (talk) 12:52, 9 December 2021 (UTC)