Talk:So Long, London/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 13:39, 11 May 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Pollosito (talk · contribs) 19:41, 13 May 2024 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.

   a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Hi, @Ippantekina! I'll be reviewing this article as soon as possible. I'm a little nervous for a reason that you can see on my user page, but at least I'm being a little more daring LOL. I apologize once and for all for the times I'm going to make you wait because it's very frustrating, because I don't have many days off, but I'll deal with this as quickly as possible. Best, Santi (talk) 19:41, 13 May 2024 (UTC)

I'm back. Today I will post suggestions. A thousand apologies for the delay. Santi (talk) 13:59, 3 June 2024 (UTC)

Thanks, ping me again when you're done with the review so I'll resolve all comments in batch :) @Pollosito: Ippantekina (talk) 09:02, 12 June 2024 (UTC)

@Pollosito, this is just a ping to remind you to finish the rest of the review. -- asilvering (talk) 01:00, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

@Asilvering: Thank u. I'll return soon, I hope. Santi (talk) 01:56, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

Background and release

• Passed. Santi (talk) 18:22, 3 June 2024 (UTC)

Music and lyrics

• She then pivots into a sort of Enya-meets-Billie Eilish with “So Long London”, starting with a root-raising choral piece and then segueing into a downtempo chamber-pop. I think it would be relevant to mention the downtempo, but I don't know what function to give it. Santi (talk) 18:22, 3 June 2024 (UTC)

  Hi @Pollosito, how's this going? PSA 🏕️🪐 (please make some noise...) 23:53, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

  @PSA: Very bad. I'll try to retake this review, since I'm no longer allowed to use the computer. Santi (talk) 03:41, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

  I'm retaking this review, I'll have to continue with the mf cellphone. Sorry for the delay. Everything in this section is ok. Santi (talk) 17:40, 6 July 2024 (UTC)

Critical reception

• this is a real tearjerker." => "this is a real tearjerker"." The rest is fine. Santi (talk) 02:36, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

  Per MOS:LQ it's the correct usage. Ippantekina (talk) 03:35, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

Commercial performance

• Reuse ref 75 for South Africa peak. Santi (talk) 02:58, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
• I suggest to also mention to the peak pos on the United Arab Emirates. As far as I know, that list covers any type of format and music. Santi (talk) 02:58, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

Personnel

• Passed. Santi (talk) 02:58, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

Charts

• This song also entered at the MENA chart. Santi (talk) 02:58, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

Certification

• Passed. Santi (talk) 02:58, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

Veredict

• @Ippantekina:  On hold until the issues are fixed. I suggest making sure you have consulted all the charts possible, because, as I mentioned, some are needed. Santi (talk) 02:58, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

  Done with the charts, thanks for the review! I tried to see if this song also charted in Egypt but the sources are all dead unfortunately.. :( Ippantekina (talk) 04:13, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

  @Pollosito: ping for above Ippantekina (talk) 07:34, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

  @Ippantekina: Don't worry, they are not dead. I already consulted and the song never entered in Egypt. So, this article has  Passed as GA. Congrats. Santi (talk) 21:27, 9 July 2024 (UTC)