Talk:Soeara Berbisa/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Zanimum (talk · contribs) 15:32, 17 May 2014 (UTC)

I'll review. -- Zanimum (talk) 15:32, 17 May 2014 (UTC)

That's quite the plot!

Passing lead, plot, legacy, explanatory notes, references, works cited.

Production

• Is there any record of who played who? You list the cast, but not their roles. I imagine that one of the works cited must at least have speculation; it would be easy to identify who played Neng Mardinah and who played Mardjohan's mother, just based on the actresses' ages.
  • Looking again, Soehana is explicitly stated to be playing a mother (which narrows the possibilities quite nicely), and I can guess with a fair amount of certainty, based on the Studio Nieuws article and the top billing that Rd Karno was Mitra and Ratna Djoewita was Neng Mardinah. Aside from that OR, Oedjang's role is a little more difficult to establish, as there were several other male characters, though Mardjohan does make the most sense. Of course, none of this is explicitly supported by the sources, so I didn't include it. I'm tempted to write a journal article about the studio, so I could include this at a later date.
    • The stills you've added are actually very helpful in letting the reader draw their own conclusions, without tiptoeing into OR. -- Zanimum (talk) 22:44, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
• "Soeara Berbisa began production..." if both sections of this sentence are based on information from the same Studio Nieuws article, then one reference at the end of the sentence is enough.
  • Good catch; that's two different articles. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:04, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

Release and reception

• Just reading the quote "in the world of indigenous sports" made me wonder, is there any reference in any of the sources as to what sport was played or at least referenced?
  • The article just says "popoeler didalam doenia sport" (popular in the world of sports); at the time, association football was popular (I believe the Dutch fielded a team of indigenous players at the 1930-something World Cup), as were the martial arts (particularly silat). Boxing and tennis both had a following. I wish this was like Harta Berdarah (which had a novelisation that I was able to access), as there'd be more information. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:04, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
    • No worries, just wondering if it was an unintentional oversight, but presuming it was indeed lost to history. -- Zanimum (talk) 22:44, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

-- Zanimum (talk) 18:36, 19 May 2014 (UTC)

• Thank you for reviewing! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:04, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
  • Approving the images and their licensing/sourcing. Looks good! GA! -- Zanimum (talk) 22:44, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
    • Thank you for reviewing! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:42, 20 May 2014 (UTC)