Talk:Soedjono Hoemardani
Latest comment: 4 years ago by The Squirrel Conspiracy in topic Did you know nomination
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 | A fact from Soedjono Hoemardani appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 25 May 2020 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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Did you know nomination
edit- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 08:07, 20 May 2020 (UTC)
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- ... that effigies of Soedjono Hoemardani were burnt by student protesters during the Malari incident? Source: Malley, Michael (1989). "Soedjono Hoemardani and Indonesian-Japanese Relations 1966-1974". Indonesia (48)., p61: "The unpopularity of [Soedjono Hoemardani's] position was reflected in the burning of his effigy and that of Japanese Prime Minister Tanaka Kakuei on several occasions by university students in Jakarta and Bandung"
- Reviewed: Clerodendrum bungei
Created by Juxlos (talk). Self-nominated at 02:33, 28 April 2020 (UTC).
@Juxlos: Article long enough, new enough, no copyvio detected, generally within policy regarding neutrality and referencing. QPQ is done. Regarding the hook, the source does not specify that the burning happened during the Malari incident (in fact it appears before the passage about 15 January). Is there another source? Also, suggest adding some relatable context to the hook (e.g. who Soedjono is, or why the protest happened) because as of now it only contains names that people haven't heard before. HaEr48 (talk) 14:10, 30 April 2020 (UTC)
- Maybe then ALT1: ... that effigies of Soedjono Hoemardani, personal assistant to Suharto, were burnt by students protesting against foreign investment?
- I understand this doesn't cover "why", but I opted to take it out in the interest of brevity and to generate curiosity. Juxlos (talk) 14:26, 30 April 2020 (UTC)
Good to go. HaEr48 (talk) 01:33, 1 May 2020 (UTC)
