Talk:Soeprapto (prosecutor)/GA1
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 17:54, 24 December 2011 (UTC)
I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:54, 24 December 2011 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:
- "After transferring often, the early 1940s he had" in the early
- Done
- "head of the court for Native Indonesians there" rm there
- Done
- "Soeprapto went to directly" went directly
- Done
- "For fifteen years he worked at various Landraad, " not sure what this is meant to say, reword. maybe say "in various locations" or something like that if that's what is implied.
- Done
- "the landraad " Landraad
- Done
- "Although the nascent army was able to hold the peace during riots at the end of 1945, when the Dutch began a major assault on Java." Sentence fragment, needs fixing, plus you use the same ref twice at the end of the sentence, so one can be rm'd.
- Done
- "In 1950 Soeprapto" comma after 1950.
- Done
- "In January of 1951" rm of
- Done
- "In 1953 he" comma after 1953
- Done
- "then Minister without Folio," not sure what that means; perhaps add something to clarify?
- Done I wikilinked it.
- Any years on the marriages? I imagine not since they would have been added, but thought I'd ask.
- Not in the summary that is online. It could theoretically be in the book, but finding said book would be a pain in the train (very few Indonesian books are reprinted, and initial print runs can be quite small; for example, large publishing houses like Gramedia may only print up 3,000 copies [www.webcitation.org/642MmP31v (indicated here)]
I'll put the article on hold for a week and pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 18:44, 24 December 2011 (UTC)
- K, everything is done. Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:45, 25 December 2011 (UTC)
- Everything looks good now, so I'll pass the article as a GA. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:39, 25 December 2011 (UTC)