Talk:Soviet cruiser Vasily Chapayev/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 13:47, 15 December 2022 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:47, 15 December 2022 (UTC)

• Images properly licensed
• Link project number (List of ships of Russia by project number) in the lede
  • Linked.
• including Project 68bis insert "the"
  • Added.
• Move the links for class and cruiser to their first appearance in the lede
  • Linked.
• Suggest using a colon after NATO reporting name
  • Added for all instances.
• Add hyphen between high and pressure
  • Added
• Link bridge, hangar
  • Linked.
• in two barrel loaders ??
  • Clarified.
• Explain or delete L/80 (personally, I save caliber lengths for the class article, but that's just me)
  • Removed.
• Retitle the Electronic warfare section as Sensors and electronic warfare
  • Amended. I have also adjusted the other section titles so that they are consistent with other articles (like Japanese battleship Ise)
• Change the link and name for radome to Bulbous bow#Sonar dome
  • Changed.
• Serial number? Do you mean yard number?
  • Yes. Edited.
• Give the codenames for the Project 877 sub and the 1134B cruiser --Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:10, 29 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Added. I have also added the NATO codenames for the other vessels mentioned in the lead and body.

@Sturmvogel 66: Thank you for this review. I believe that I have made the changes. Please tell me if there is anything else. simongraham (talk) 16:18, 30 December 2022 (UTC)