Talk:Squatting in Hamburg

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Shushugah in topic GA Review

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk10:27, 11 February 2022 (UTC)Reply

 
The Erotic Art Museum in Hamburg
  • ... that squatters in Hamburg briefly occupied the former Erotic Art Museum? Source: https://taz.de/!427480/ : In der Nacht zu Sonntag dringen Gentrifizierungsgegner in das ehemalige Erotic Art Museum in der Bernhard-Nocht-Straße ein und errichten Strassenbarrikaden. Die Polizei räumte das Gebäude : "On Sunday night, opponents of gentrification invaded the former Erotic Art Museum in Bernhard-Nocht-Straße and set up street barricades. The police cleared the building"
    • ALT1: ... that squatters in the former Erotic Art Museum in Hamburg were quickly evicted? Source: https://taz.de/!427480/ : In der Nacht zu Sonntag dringen Gentrifizierungsgegner in das ehemalige Erotic Art Museum in der Bernhard-Nocht-Straße ein und errichten Strassenbarrikaden. Die Polizei räumte das Gebäude : "On Sunday night, opponents of gentrification invaded the former Erotic Art Museum in Bernhard-Nocht-Straße and set up street barricades. The police cleared the building"

Moved to mainspace by Mujinga (talk). Self-nominated at 11:09, 8 February 2022 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
  • Other problems:  
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Article is new enough, long enough and well sourced. It seems neutral and well written. Both hooks are cited and interesting. Earwig didn't detect any copyvio (although a lot of the sources aren't in English anyway) and qpq has been provided. The photo is free, easy to see at 100px and is in the article. This one's all ready! BuySomeApples (talk) 19:19, 10 February 2022 (UTC) To T:DYK/P5Reply

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Squatting in Hamburg/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Shushugah (talk · contribs) 16:36, 1 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Review

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Rate Attribute Review Comment
1. Well-written:
  1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. I've directly fixed a few grammatical mistakes, but they're few/minor.
  1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. The structure is chronological and reasonable, with further readings below reference/see also sections.
2. Verifiable with no original research:
  2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. Indeed.
  2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). Yes. In general, all the sources are high quality, with a number of books, and several newspaper articles.
  2c. it contains no original research. None that I could find.
  2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism.
3. Broad in its coverage:
  3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
  3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
  4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
  5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
  6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.
  6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
  7. Overall assessment.

General comments:

  • Wikilink Volxkuche
  • Properly attribute the two authors Karl-Heinz Dellwo and Willi Baerof the book "Wir wollen alles – Die Hausbesetzungen in Hamburg" with their names instead of "Various"
  • Legalized is a technical/legal concept that is mentioned several times, but not explained.
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It passes copyvio check. Because it's a translated article, I also checked whether attribution was provided. While this article is quite different from the German one, it is a derivative, using same images/sources in various cases. This would be fixed with a talk page template {{Translated page}}. Further instructions available at Help:Translate.

I will give a week before I mark it as succeeded/failed, unless you're actively working on it, in which case I will give more time to address my feedback. Looking forward to working with you! ~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 16:36, 1 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

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