Talk:Stéphane Sparagna

Latest comment: 8 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Stéphane Sparagna/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:42, 17 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 18:42, 17 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Lead

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  • Delink France in the prose and infobox per WP:OVERLINK
  • "on loan Marseille," - missing "to"

Marseille

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2016-17 season: Loan to Auxerre

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  • "He made his debut for the club in their Ligue 2 opener on 30 July 2016," - I know what opener means but I think opening game would be better
  • "playing the full 90 minutes in a 0-0 draw with Red Star." - needs the longer hyphen for consistency.

References

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Overall prose is good. Awaiting response on all points. MWright96 (talk) 07:22, 18 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

Summary of Fixes

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Thank you for the review MWright96. I have made the following changes as per your recommendations.

  • France has been delinked in the lead and infobox
  • "on loan Marseille" now reads "on loan from Marseille"
  • the wikilink Exhibition match#Club football is now used for the word "friendly"
  • "He made his debut for the club in their Ligue 2 opener on 30 July 2016," no reads "He made his debut for the club in their opening Ligue 2 game on..."
  • A longer hyphen has been inserted in relation to the draw with Red Star