Talk:Stéphane Sparagna/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:42, 17 August 2016 (UTC)

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 18:42, 17 August 2016 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• no dab links

Lead

• Delink France in the prose and infobox per WP:OVERLINK
• "on loan Marseille," - missing "to"

Marseille

• The wikilink on the word "friendly" should be to Exhibition match#Club football

2016-17 season: Loan to Auxerre

• "He made his debut for the club in their Ligue 2 opener on 30 July 2016," - I know what opener means but I think opening game would be better
• "playing the full 90 minutes in a 0-0 draw with Red Star." - needs the longer hyphen for consistency.

References

• no dead links

Overall prose is good. Awaiting response on all points. MWright96 (talk) 07:22, 18 August 2016 (UTC)

Summary of Fixes

Thank you for the review MWright96. I have made the following changes as per your recommendations.

• France has been delinked in the lead and infobox
• "on loan Marseille" now reads "on loan from Marseille"
• the wikilink Exhibition match#Club football is now used for the word "friendly"
• "He made his debut for the club in their Ligue 2 opener on 30 July 2016," no reads "He made his debut for the club in their opening Ligue 2 game on..."
• A longer hyphen has been inserted in relation to the draw with Red Star
  • Promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 11:14, 18 August 2016 (UTC)