Talk:Star on the Mountain

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 09:58, 13 May 2022 (UTC)

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The El Paso Star illuminated at sunset in 2012

• ... that the El Paso Star (pictured) is lit up every night and visible from the air up to 100 miles (160 km) away? Source: [1][2][3]
  • ALT1: ... that the El Paso Star (pictured) has been frequently vandalized throughout its entire existence? Source: [4]
  • ALT2: ... that the El Paso Star (pictured) costs about $8 to light per night? Source: [5]
  • ALT3: ... that the El Paso Star (pictured) has a length greater than its width to correct distortion when viewed from the ground? Source: https://www.newspapers.com/clip/99778802/epec-to-light-star-friday/
  • Comment: Previously nominated, withdrawn then.

Improved to Good Article status by Bsoyka (talk). Self-nominated at 19:46, 17 April 2022 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy compliance:

• Adequate sourcing:
• Neutral:
• Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing: - n

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: None required.

Overall: There appears to be some close paraphrasing that needs to be reviewed. --evrik ^(talk) 05:00, 18 April 2022 (UTC)

@Evrik: Fixed that up a little, mostly names and a quote now. Bsoyka (talk) 11:53, 18 April 2022 (UTC)

• comment "prevent distortion" surely it corrects the distortion caused by viewing it from the ground. Victuallers (talk) 13:09, 18 April 2022 (UTC)

  Edited. Bsoyka (talk) 17:20, 18 April 2022 (UTC)

• Approving Alt0 hook. --evrik ^(talk) 20:34, 18 April 2022 (UTC)

GA review

This review is transcluded from Talk:El Paso Star/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 17:10, 10 April 2022 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Overall, it's almost there. The first section could use a reflow to make the paragraphs less choppy, and there are two minor comma items, one minor reference item (and a suggestion), and alt text on the image. @Bsoyka: 7-day hold. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 17:30, 10 April 2022 (UTC)

Copy changes

• holiday season, but - remove comma

   Done: Diff. Bsoyka (talk) 19:54, 10 April 2022 (UTC)

• November 29, 1940 at - MOS:DATECOMMA needed

   Done: Diff. Bsoyka (talk) 19:54, 10 April 2022 (UTC)

• A lot of choppy one- or two-sentence paragraphs in "20th century" header

   Fixed: Combined some of them together, hopefully flows better now. Bsoyka (talk) 02:05, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

Other

• Add page numbers to newspapers.com refs (this requires looking at the page)

   Done: Diff. Bsoyka (talk) 19:54, 10 April 2022 (UTC)

• References are archived.

   Note: Archived one more that I must've missed. Bsoyka (talk) 02:05, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

• Since it's been a year and the Herald-Post is now in newspapers.com for the full run, do a search to see if that newspaper has any articles that might be relevant.

   Doing...: Definitely a lot to sift through there, working on it. Bsoyka (talk) 02:05, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Sammi Brie: Calling this one  Done: I think I've gathered as much as I can from the Herald-Post. Diff. Bsoyka (talk) 17:12, 17 April 2022 (UTC)

  Going to pass for GA. It definitely has a bit more heft with the Herald-Post materials. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 17:26, 17 April 2022 (UTC)

• The lone image is PD, but it does need alt text.

   Done: Used A five-pointed star made up of white lights on a mountain during an orange sunset, with a tree silhouette in the foreground. Diff. Bsoyka (talk) 19:54, 10 April 2022 (UTC)

Review in progress