Talk:Star on the Mountain/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Sammi Brie in topic GA review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 17:10, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
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Overall, it's almost there. The first section could use a reflow to make the paragraphs less choppy, and there are two minor comma items, one minor reference item (and a suggestion), and alt text on the image. @Bsoyka: 7-day hold. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 17:30, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
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- remove comma- Done: Diff. Bsoyka (talk) 19:54, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
November 29, 1940 at
- MOS:DATECOMMA needed- Done: Diff. Bsoyka (talk) 19:54, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
- A lot of choppy one- or two-sentence paragraphs in "20th century" header
- Fixed: Combined some of them together, hopefully flows better now. Bsoyka (talk) 02:05, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
Other
edit- Add page numbers to newspapers.com refs (this requires looking at the page)
- Done: Diff. Bsoyka (talk) 19:54, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
- References are archived.
- Note: Archived one more that I must've missed. Bsoyka (talk) 02:05, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
- Since it's been a year and the Herald-Post is now in newspapers.com for the full run, do a search to see if that newspaper has any articles that might be relevant.
- Doing...: Definitely a lot to sift through there, working on it. Bsoyka (talk) 02:05, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
- @Sammi Brie: Calling this one Done: I think I've gathered as much as I can from the Herald-Post. Diff. Bsoyka (talk) 17:12, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
- Going to pass for GA. It definitely has a bit more heft with the Herald-Post materials. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 17:26, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
- @Sammi Brie: Calling this one Done: I think I've gathered as much as I can from the Herald-Post. Diff. Bsoyka (talk) 17:12, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
- Doing...: Definitely a lot to sift through there, working on it. Bsoyka (talk) 02:05, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
- The lone image is PD, but it does need alt text.
- Done: Used
A five-pointed star made up of white lights on a mountain during an orange sunset, with a tree silhouette in the foreground
. Diff. Bsoyka (talk) 19:54, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
- Done: Used
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