Talk:Step by Step (Braxe + Falcon song)

Latest comment: 1 day ago by BarntToust in topic GA Review

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Nominator: BarntToust (talk · contribs) 22:18, 30 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Chchcheckit (talk · contribs) 15:12, 1 December 2024 (UTC)Reply


Gonna work on this (GARC). // Chchcheckit (talk) 15:12, 1 December 2024 (UTC)Reply

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (references):  
    b (citations to reliable sources):  
    c (OR):  
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):  
    b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  

Overall:
Pass/Fail:  

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Well-written

  • The demo that became "Step by Step" was originally an instrumental, and "at some point" during the duo's process of finishing the demos, they thought to send it to Panda Bear, who wrote a song to go with it. Could this be written better?   Done
  • Earwig copyvio: highest % is 27% (pitchfork step by step video)
  • Filmed in Tokyo, it includes footage from Onodera's early skateboarding days as well as shots of him winning awards and landing tricks. A friend of Braxe's, Tokikawa had the idea of showing the growth of a child from a very young age through the practice of skateboarding, something that Braxe and Falcon accepted instantly since they had skateboarded from their youth. almost word-for-word copy of article: put what it says into your own words   Done

Accuracy/Verifiability/Spotchecks

  • pending

Spotcheck:

  • pending
  • does not use any unreliable sources

Broad

  • pending

NPOV

  • pending

Stability

  • Nominator is basically the only person who's written this as of late; no edit conflicts etc

Illustrations/Images

  • Not too sure about the cover artwork but the other photo is good. pending A fellow editor looked at this, and agreed that the cover work would be public domain in the USA for its simplicity, but tagged it as probably not so in UK/France, where the threshold of originality for copyright is lower. BarntToust 16:10, 3 December 2024 (UTC) Reply

// Chchcheckit (talk) 13:16, 3 December 2024 (UTC)Reply