Talk:Structure implies multiplicity

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Squandermania in topic 1st paragraph

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The first paragraph is confusing and horrible to read. DoItAgain 13:25, 19 August 2006 (UTC)Reply

How so? Hyacinth 21:33, 19 August 2006 (UTC)Reply
Well, the grammar is bad, the sentences are too long and convoluted and technical terms are not defined clearly and unambiguously. Remember that the general reader will need a clear and simple introduction to the subject. --Tdent 18:01, 17 September 2006 (UTC)Reply

I agree. I don't understand the concept and I read it several times over. If I wasn't set on understanding it I wouldhave given up a long time ago.--SurrealWarrior 14:05, 18 January 2007 (UTC)Reply

Ditto. Squandermania (talk) 18:24, 26 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

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The John Clough link points to a footballer not the mathematician/musician Rpm13 (talk) 03:41, 1 September 2011 (UTC)Reply