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Latest comment: 2 years ago by Unexpectedlydian in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Unexpectedlydian (talk · contribs) 21:13, 20 February 2022 (UTC)Reply


Hi there, I'll be reviewing this article. Looks good so I shouldn't have too much to say! I'll record my general comments and update the table below as I go. Unexpectedlydian (talk) 21:13, 20 February 2022 (UTC)Reply

General comments

Lead

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  • "As of July 2017, it is the largest commingled recycling facility in the United States" – I think July 2017 is now a tad out-of-date. The Sims website is not dated but suggests the facility is still the largest in the U.S. (and in fact, it states that it is the largest in North America).
    • It's a good point, but I'd rather not go by the superlatives claimed by the company itself. I found another source from last month which has this claim. It's quoting a company spokesperson, and appears to be a so-so industry site, but that still seems a little better than just citing the official site, I suppose. Importantly, I haven't seen any reason to doubt the claim.
      • Thanks for looking into this, I think the claim on the official site plus this newer secondary source in enough to substantiate the claim.   Done

Construction and facilities

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  • "The 11-acre property" – Use a convert template to also display area in metres squared.
    •   Done
  • "The buildings are further raised above four feet of recycled glass and stone" – I was a bit confused reading this whether the buildings are raised a further four feet above the requirement to be resilient against rising water levels (i.e., eight feet in total)? Or are the buildings at the same level as the pier?
    •   Done
  • "four feet of recycled glass and stone from the development of the Second Avenue Subway project" – Recommend this is amended to specify it's "glass and stone left over from the development..."
    •   Done
  • "The administrative building includes an education center which includes exhibits explaining how the plant operates for student and tour groups and connects to the main processing building for public viewing via elevated pedestrian walkway." – Sentence is a bit long and difficult to follow. I suggest splitting it into two.
    •   Done
  • "30,000 square feet" − Another convert template to m2.
    •   Done
  • "As of July 2017, it is the largest commingled recycling facility in the United States." – See comment above about this same statement.
    •   Done

Activity

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  • "The facility's primary purpose is to sort the materials it receives, before selling to other processors." – Extremely picky suggestion for the sake of clarity: "The facility's primary purpose is to sort the materials it receives before selling them to other processors."
    •   Done
  • "which reduces the mileage sanitation trucks had to travel previously by about 240,000 miles." – For clarity, I suggest specifying that this is "the combined mileage".
    •   Done, with "total"
  • "240,000 miles" – Another convert template to km.
    •   Done
  • "Another machine grinds glass small enough to fall from the mixed stream to a dedicated one." – Is the glass falling to a dedicated stream below the mixed stream? If so, probably worth adding "below" to the end of the sentence.
    •   Done - and added a cite.
  • WikiLink Optical sorting
    •   Done
  • The URL for Ref 12 (10 fun facts about the Sunset Park Material Recovery Facility, Untapped New York) does not automatically display all pages at once. Perhaps this URL works instead: https://untappedcities.com/2015/12/10/10-fun-facts-about-the-sunset-park-material-recovery-facility-nycs-state-of-the-art-municipal-recycling-facility/?displayall=true
    •   Done
  • "1983 bottle bill" – Probably worth expanding on what this is (perhaps linking to or referencing Container-deposit legislation?) as an outside reader will likely not be familiar.
    •   Done

Images

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  • Good quality, aid understanding of the article, licenses look ok. All of them require alterative descriptions.
    •   Done

Interim comments

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Final comments

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Rate Attribute Review Comment
1. Well-written:
  1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.

Just a few general comments to address.  Y

  1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.

Content that MOS are met. Just a small possible amendment to the date referenced in the lead (see general comments).  Y

2. Verifiable with no original research:
  2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.

 Y

  2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).

The URL for Ref 12 (Untapped New York) does not automatically display all pages at once.  Y

  2c. it contains no original research.

Everything is backed up with sources, no evidence of original research.  Y

  2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism.

Copyvio detector brings up nothing of concern.  Y

3. Broad in its coverage:
  3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.

Content that the scope is appropriate.  Y

  3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).

 Y

  4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.

 Y

  5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.

Nothing on talk page to address, all recent edits have been constructive.  Y

6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
  6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.

 Y

  6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.

All images need alt descriptions.  Y

  7. Overall assessment.

Good work, happy to promote to GA!  Y

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