Talk:Tekken 6/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TeenAngels1234 (talk · contribs) 08:17, 25 September 2022 (UTC)

I'm gonna review this article. Stay tuned.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 08:17, 25 September 2022 (UTC) Okay. Sorry, I was busy in RL. So, let's go.

• Are you sure the last part of 'Gameplay' is not more appropriate for 'Development'?
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• "They avoided this for the spinoff Tekken Tag Tournament, which only allowed alternating use of four fighters". Is this really necessary? It seems a bit superfluous.
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• "Preorders ... wireless controller.". Ditto.
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• "Harada referred ... recreation of the arcade game'. Again, these seem to me to be comments that add little of information to the article.
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• I would suggest removing a few names from the list of musicians. Maybe stay only those with wlinks, which seem to me more relevant and encyclopedic to mention.
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• Shiina's appreciative comment also seems unencyclopedic to me.
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• I would shorten some critic's opinions, reducing them to the bone, especially in the first few paragraphs. I would put a few more commas, too.
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@Tintor2:That's all. Good job. Already a pretty good article.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 11:23, 30 September 2022 (UTC)

@TeenAngels1234: Rearranged most of the content involved the reception too. Thanks for the review.Tintor2 (talk) 18:48, 30 September 2022 (UTC) @TeenAngels1234: Did I miss something by any chance?Tintor2 (talk) 13:04, 2 October 2022 (UTC)

@Tintor2: No, no. I'm just still busy. Today I'm gonna read the full article again, and, if nothing emerges, I'll promote it. Don't worry :')--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 13:51, 2 October 2022 (UTC)

Okay. So:

• "It was compared the style". Maybe 'The style was compared" is better.
• You should correct the following "response".
• "When the work was concluded, Matsuyama was surprised at how well Lars fitted in with the game's cast" sounds kinda trivial to me.
• "However, Harada revealed they had encountered difficulties". Is the 'however' necessary?

@Tintor2: Good work~

@TeenAngels1234: I think I covered anything but can't find that however.Tintor2 (talk) 23:22, 2 October 2022 (UTC)

Don't worry. Promoted. Good prose, good sources, and good information.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 00:34, 3 October 2022 (UTC)